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Interruption

Late night knock
Gather her hem
Disturb her skin

tommielynn

Written by tommielynn

(Tommie Lynn)

Published 9th Feb 2016

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Re. Interruption

Anonymous

9th Feb 2016 3:11pm

Tommie Lynn,

So many things to imagine, in so few words....Disturb! ;-)

tornado

tommielynn (Tommie Lynn)

10th Feb 2016 1:10am

Thank you Tornado, happy you liked it 😊

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Gahddess_Worship (Osomajestuoso)

9th Feb 2016 3:48pm

Ruby lips at the peep-hole :) This proves the trite phrase "a little goes a long way" :) Brava!

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tommielynn (Tommie Lynn)

10th Feb 2016 1:11am

It most certainly does GW, thank you so much 😊

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Re. Interruption

22nd Feb 2016 3:51pm

Wow. So much from such concise presentation. Seriously wow.

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tommielynn (Tommie Lynn)

23rd Feb 2016 3:51am

A little goes a long way. Or so they say.
Thanks a lot Sammy 😊

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