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inner winner

inner winner

he felt her inner
wow
she screamed  
and
became an ever  cumming
valley winner

she held on to his hardish
won't let him in
it was too hard as steel
she wanted it to peel
ere it softened a bit
ere the final hard hit
she let him then
tear within
as she opened her teary eyes
he was cumming

she was swimming  
like on a surf of tsunami  
only special cummmmming
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