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Jane

in the beginning
we were spinning
we were turning
round and round

we were humming
we were singing
enraptured
in the sound

in the music
of our heartbeats
in the throbbing
in between

all our thinking
as our linking
then created
our shared dream -

now it's later
so much later
the years
have slipped away

still together
never never
did we think
our love would stay

through the heartaches
and the turmoil
through the pain
and too the joy

you are still
to me a young girl
and to you
I'm still a boy -
Written by bcpoet (Lawrence)
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