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Read Our Words
lay your head upon my lap
my sweet luv read to me
whisper our words we've inked of luv
that's made our hearts mingle
our souls fall deeply in luv
and joined our spirits as one
let your voice echo thru me
hear the Angel's humming
who have blessed our sacredness
closing my eyes as I feel you
listening to our sacred luv
on the tip of your tongue
placing my hand upon my heart
also your chest at the same time
feeling our words come to life
my sweet luv read to me
whisper our words we've inked of luv
that's made our hearts mingle
our souls fall deeply in luv
and joined our spirits as one
let your voice echo thru me
hear the Angel's humming
who have blessed our sacredness
closing my eyes as I feel you
listening to our sacred luv
on the tip of your tongue
placing my hand upon my heart
also your chest at the same time
feeling our words come to life
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Re. Read Our Words
1st Feb 2016 11:23pm
aww...... I feel the warm beat of this ink..:)
"let your voice echo thru me
hear the Angel's humming
who have blessed our sacredness"<--- so lovely, pprincess! xo
"let your voice echo thru me
hear the Angel's humming
who have blessed our sacredness"<--- so lovely, pprincess! xo
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Re: Re. Read Our Words
2nd Feb 2016 00:51am
Lady Rain......I'm so honored you graced my page with your beautiful smile......honored by your warmness of this piece......such a calmness and peacefulness I felt writting this......thank you precious friend xo :)
Re. Read Our Words
2nd Feb 2016 2:32am
I feel like a voyeur . . . Standing in the shadows
observing this whole situation . . . I am blessed . . .
observing this whole situation . . . I am blessed . . .
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Re: Re. Read Our Words
3rd Feb 2016 3:12am
Awe SMG.....I'm so honored to know your close by in the shadows watching in case if should stumble.....you're are precious to me....thank you for the blessing of them xo :)
Re. Read Our Words
2nd Feb 2016 9:45am
Subtly, this beautiful piece took me that quiet place where love knows no bounds.
Thanks for sharing this Gail. It's been a while I read lovely poems.
Thanks for sharing this Gail. It's been a while I read lovely poems.
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Re: Re. Read Our Words
3rd Feb 2016 3:14am
Hey Ossy.....thank you for leaving such calm feelings of my ink.....it's been a long while.....thank you for the blessing of your prescence upon my page.....xo :)
Re. Read Our Words
2nd Feb 2016 10:52am
Re: Re. Read Our Words
3rd Feb 2016 3:15am
Hey Kavik.....thank you so much for such warm words.....glad you like.....makes me smile xo :)
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Re: Re. Read Our Words
3rd Feb 2016 3:18am
Sweet S.....thank you for the happy tear that just glided down my cheek from your words.....I'm so glad you joined me in my peaceful world.....I truly felt peaceful when I wrote this......happy you felt it so.....xo :)
Re. Read Our Words
2nd Feb 2016 7:44pm
The elusive idea of two caterpillar-souls morphing into one butterfly yet again poked at.
Enjoyed the fancy.
Enjoyed the fancy.
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Re: Re. Read Our Words
3rd Feb 2016 3:19am
Hi Wanderer.....what a great comment.....I read my write over and what a visual you gave to me with your words......thank you so much xo :)
Re. Read Our Words
3rd Feb 2016 5:30am
Re: Re. Read Our Words
5th Feb 2016 1:54am
Thank you Glen.....always honored by your smile upon my page.....take it easy.....xo :)