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Warming My Life
insanity slithers
all around
distorting ideas
within the brain
wires crossed
empathy lost
anger invades
blistered heart
praying out loud
no response
busy signal
empty sky
desperation plea
dead flowers
rosary in hand
burning flesh
suicidal thoughts
reality blurred
fantasy world
lonely words splinter
reborn anew
love unconditional
don’t need god
blessed with sisters
never alone
these ladies
are the light
warming my life
Thanks to my sisters on DU.. (Taryn, Brenda, Jackie, Lady Devlin, Blue_Angel, Mysterious and RedRidingHood) with love to you special, and brilliant ladies..
all around
distorting ideas
within the brain
wires crossed
empathy lost
anger invades
blistered heart
praying out loud
no response
busy signal
empty sky
desperation plea
dead flowers
rosary in hand
burning flesh
suicidal thoughts
reality blurred
fantasy world
lonely words splinter
reborn anew
love unconditional
don’t need god
blessed with sisters
never alone
these ladies
are the light
warming my life
Thanks to my sisters on DU.. (Taryn, Brenda, Jackie, Lady Devlin, Blue_Angel, Mysterious and RedRidingHood) with love to you special, and brilliant ladies..
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Re. Warming My Life
Anonymous
1st Feb 2016 10:27pm
Sir Diamond. . .This piece has more than just 'Warmed My Life'. . .A beautiful tribute, and I'm honored to be among the fellowship of these ladies. . .love to you & beyond respect. . .~xo, Devlin.
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Re: Re. Warming My Life
1st Feb 2016 10:56pm
Lady Devlin.. i'm so glad it warmed your life.. you and all my sisters mean the world to me.. thanks for all your support.. and being a friend, and sister.. i'm honored to make your reading list.. with love, and respect..
Dave
Dave
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Re: Re. Warming My Life
2nd Feb 2016 2:31am
Taryn.. i'm glad you liked.. you ladies keep me going.. sure i get depressed, but you lovely sisters are my light, and warmth.. thanks for being you, and lending me your heart.. i always know i can speak freely with you.. and i appreciate that.. you mean the world to me.. with love, and respect always..
Dave
Dave
Re. Warming My Life
2nd Feb 2016 3:01am
"desperation plea
dead flowers
rosary in hand
burning flesh
suicidal thoughts
reality blurred
fantasy world
lonely words splinter".... - I am reminded of this quote. "I have cultivated my hysteria with pleasure and terror.'' Charles Baudelaire .... Your warmth and raw depth cultivates a magnetic presence that draws us in, my friend, my brother, my poetry carver! Thank you for this and especially for being you! Love and respect returned, blue angel <3
dead flowers
rosary in hand
burning flesh
suicidal thoughts
reality blurred
fantasy world
lonely words splinter".... - I am reminded of this quote. "I have cultivated my hysteria with pleasure and terror.'' Charles Baudelaire .... Your warmth and raw depth cultivates a magnetic presence that draws us in, my friend, my brother, my poetry carver! Thank you for this and especially for being you! Love and respect returned, blue angel <3
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Re. Warming My Life
2nd Feb 2016 3:11am
Lady Blue.. you're most welcome.. thanks for being you.. your style is so brilliant, as are you.. i loved and cherish our collab.. and you, and the rest of my sisters.. have a common value.. you're original, the true article.. love and respect always my sister..
Dave
Dave
Re. Warming My Life
2nd Feb 2016 3:40am
David my brother, you are part of what makes us all so special my friend, count on it...
I am humbled and touched Thank you the feelings are mutual xoxoxox
Jackie xoxoxoxo
(((((((((((((((((((((Dave))))))))))))))))))))))
I am humbled and touched Thank you the feelings are mutual xoxoxox
Jackie xoxoxoxo
(((((((((((((((((((((Dave))))))))))))))))))))))
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Re: Re. Warming My Life
Jackie.. i'm glad you liked it.. i mean every word.. you ladies are strength personified.. but you lend me your heart.. and that means so much to me.. honored to make your RL.. forever your brother.. i loves you..
Dave
Dave
Re. Warming My Life
3rd Feb 2016 5:36am
Awww Dave! This is indeed warming piece. Made me all nice and toasty inside much needed since I'm sick as of this morning lol I'm glad to have met you as well! You are a sweet person Dave (: reading list it goes.... FUCKING LOVED IT (:
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Re: Re. Warming My Life
3rd Feb 2016 8:41pm
Thanks, Red.. sorry you're sick.. that sucks.. i'm glad you enjoyed the write.. i'm glad to have met you as well.. you've been an inspiration.. i'm glad you FUCKING LOVED IT.. and am honored to be in your reading list.. with love, and respect..
Dave
Dave
Re. Warming My Life
5th Feb 2016 1:08am
Loved. What a great piece. I could hear this as well. xoxox List baby :)
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Re: Re. Warming My Life
5th Feb 2016 1:24am
Thanks, Mysterious.. so glad you liked it.. it was all heartfelt.. i appreciate your kind words.. and making your RL.. with love, and respect..
Dave
Dave