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At Day's End
oh those pleasant day's of love
when couple's were seen as flames
and shadows laughed beneath the moon lit night;
love's embers burned slowly becoming ashes of lust
warm rainy day's kissed eyelids and white silk couldn't hide buds from blooming;
with night pressed
to lips the burning candle exposes breasts and a bearded face leans into the light; they are the same in the flicker of darkness
tender moments intensified;
still wet from the rain the need to touch her increased hands trailing her secrets;
memorizing the color in her cheeks and the deep pink of her splendid nipples and wanting to be a thief of time; to be with her like this at day's end
when couple's were seen as flames
and shadows laughed beneath the moon lit night;
love's embers burned slowly becoming ashes of lust
warm rainy day's kissed eyelids and white silk couldn't hide buds from blooming;
with night pressed
to lips the burning candle exposes breasts and a bearded face leans into the light; they are the same in the flicker of darkness
tender moments intensified;
still wet from the rain the need to touch her increased hands trailing her secrets;
memorizing the color in her cheeks and the deep pink of her splendid nipples and wanting to be a thief of time; to be with her like this at day's end
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Re. At Day's End
29th Jan 2016 4:38am
To be with her like this at day's end &in harmony s olaced souls blossom and blend
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29th Jan 2016 3:48pm
Tommie, you do romance so well. You create super sensual scenes that provoke such beautiful thoughts. "splendid pink nipples" oh my! Bravisima!
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29th Jan 2016 3:48pm
Exquisitely written. It's just enough to peek in and imagine.
Awesome stuff Tommie.
W
Awesome stuff Tommie.
W
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29th Jan 2016 8:58pm
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29th Jan 2016 8:58pm
....love the slow unveiling of passion and need. Left so much to stir the imagination and pique lust's interest. Really enjoyed this, TL!....
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29th Jan 2016 9:01pm
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Anonymous
29th Jan 2016 11:02pm
Tommie Lynn,
All days should have such endings. Loved the embers burning slowly line and the thought of them burning bright red in the twilight.
tornado
All days should have such endings. Loved the embers burning slowly line and the thought of them burning bright red in the twilight.
tornado
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