Tease~

Tease indeed Rain, this is so sexy, so sensual, you are the true mistress of seductive poetry. Took me back to a girl in the office who did things like this.
Pwoah! write on baby I luv's yah! :-)

Wow! What a compliment inside a compliment, Tony! :) I’m ecstatic at the fact that I could bring back a sexy fond memory for you! Thank darlin’ and appreciate the reading list…. luv's yah!

Very provocative and done with great style.
I tip my hat.
W

Thank you so much Wally! :) Pleased you took a few seconds to inhale my lines…
Pen Respect~

works so nicely with the lyrics of Bowie's "China Girl". You have a few elements that for someone like me always causes an eruption.

Well if the ink caused somewhat of an eruption, let’s close down shop and call it a day because my goal has been reached. :) It’s always my ultimate goal, moving readers with my words. Thank you so much Ted!

This is highly intelligent, classy eroticism Rain.

"arch- deepened, ass raised
cheeks gently parted; exhibiting a wet concept
enticing piqued lips to taste torrential rifts…
flavored with saturated finesse."

I'm in awe of this.  A "wet concept" is a uniquely cerebral way of putting it.  This is a turn on for both the mind and body.  Excellent!
 

Crow, I’m really stoked by your response. I never want my erotic to come-off as, ‘pornish’ or classless but sometimes when I write edgy, my ink seems compromised in it’s substance. So thank you for understanding my mental tease! Loved your thoughts....

Tease
Definitely
What a perfect dance
Visually stunning
Taste every intention
Left perfectly teased

My mission was to tease, G.! I love when I succeed at something so sensual! :)Thank you for always ‘teasing’ me with your pen, and I appreciate you keeping her close to ya….

Ahhh, rain1courtel, luv ~ :-*

This is utterly scrumptious, you perspicacious temptress, you!

You really are doing absolutely naught to deter me from discovering precisely how to incite you to "come through this computer," woman, with your "lesbian lyrical lust."

I'm just saying... ;-*

 haha...Thank you sexy one for the luscious comment! I’m a sexual liberated woman, in tune with my sensuality, so don’t ‘tease’ me. Have me serving up my chocolate goodies to ya. ;)  #Stop playing! I'm just saying....

Rain,
 I have to say that was as skillfully written as it was sizzling. I have to say that was visually delightful and rather hardening to read. Beautifully
seductive and better than any striptease. Really enjoyed the twist at the end. Just wish I would not have read this so late because now I need to cool down. Perfect.. Just perfect bravo..

Keith

I’m glowing because of your comment Keith!  :) Such sensual and honest words you left here for me to enjoy, and I couldn't be more pleased. I'm thankful for your poetic support. Pen love~

erotica personified...
Rain ..the is so sublime..
the verbiage..the pace
the tone..tease...ha..
more like seduced!!
so much to engage here...
there's really not enough
i can say about this vibe
so just let me say simply
this was truly a pleasure
to read...

you're a true credit to poetry
lady!!

Naajir, man.... even your choice of words when describing my ink deserves a superior nod. Delighted to know my pen seduced you. Your continuous support doesn’t go unnoticed. Thanks for the ink-love,  happy for the RL. :)

Before you begin, handcuff my feet together and tie my hands behind my back. A tease such as thee, no resistance could I muster. The weakness in me would make you my master...
jj

“handcuff my feet together and tie my hands behind my back” <---- all bondage-like, huh? lol!
 So who’s the tease now, JJ?! ;) Are you sure that the hot redhead won’t be jealous? o_O… Thank you luv! You're always so encouraging towards me...  

Oh Tara, she's just an old windbag, nothing more than a blowhard to shoot the breeze with. Sheet just can't be tied down... but you are worth sinking my teeth into, and when you pop, you make it rain...
JJ

LMAO! I love it!

must not read Rain at work
must not read Rain at work
must not read Rain at work
must not read Rain at work
must not read Rain at work
must not read Rain at work
must not read Rain at work
must not read Rain at work
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good lord woman, i'm gonna slide right out of my tights ltm
mercy! this is an erotic feast
i've always loved the balance of sensual & fuckhawt sexiness in your writing...
... this was no different
xoxox

When I read this, I actually laughed out! Reading something sexual at work is almost as bad as reading a steamy novel inside your car, on church grounds. It’s kinda’ hard to do, eh? lmbo..... You know how I adore you and all that you are, so being supportive of my pen, gives me great joy!  :)Your comment rocked suga! Thanks a bunch and appreciate you kidnappin' her. xo

pfffft nevermind reading in the car o.O i listen to pnr audio books ... loudly lol

bwahahaha... ^^^^This woman rocks!!!  Ima' be like her when I grow up! xoxo

Guessing the room the pic is set in (kitchen), this poem reads like a tale of "what happened when she invited me inside for a coffee." Riotous.

She’d probably feed you fluffy pancakes, drenched in syrup, with extra butter to go along with that coffee you were inviting in for. Lol… Thank you so much Solomon!
(Bathroom pic)

".....employing covet eyes for a lust-show that requires  
an untamed imagination,  
and strength to stand idly by, without the use of hands  
aching to touch a body that’s….  
yearning to be intimately handled. "    😋  
 
a sexy morning memory, a super seductive tease , no doubt.   #theneedtofuckeruptsfire  
This one is even too damned hot for the "DU"  
This is one of the sexiest, most sensual writes you have ever published (and you know that I am a fan follower from way back)  
Damn Rain, there isn't any water falling from these clouds....my, my, my

"This is one of the sexiest, most sensual writes you have ever published (and you know that I am a fan follower from way back)” <---*like four flats on a cadillac!* lol. yeah, we’ve been rollin’ for a minute now. Your proclamation and excitement warms my skin, Archie! Thankya kindly fella! :) Love that you took her home with ya...

Rain, Rain ... That's so hot and juicy AND classy, I bow to you! Have to read your vivid piece again. Now!

 “That's so hot and juicy AND classy!” <---*throws arms in air victoriously*…..because Chiyo co-signed that I met my objective.  :) Thank you, beautiful! xo

her criminal body needs to be booked & fingerprinted.
she's devastating...

....omg! I love that, John!  :) Your simple assertions are always packed with power! Thank you for passing through.....

Miss Rain, Miss Rain. . .it's raining down my thighs, and I once penned:  "My pussy needs an umbrella", now need I say more [because everyone else has already said all that is need to be said]. . .respect & love to you, Woman. . .~Devlin.

Oh Gawd! I screamed out a chuckle reading this comment. lol... "My pussy needs an umbrella" <--and there you have it, the origin of my name. I've got to read this poem in question because it sounds like a 'soaker'. ;) Love when you stop by, Dev.....

Mmmmmm Sexy Rain......you're the second write I've read this morning and will be the last as I go back to bed.....not to to sleep or to read this again......but I'm sure I won't be sleeping first......sexy sexy sexy......as always......luvin this morning greeting......luv and hugs xo :)

I'm glad you liked my sexiness, Ms. sexy one! :)...... and no, don't sleep honey, especially when that thang' needs tending to. lol....'Finger tampering' is a girl's best friend! #wink!
Thank you purple princess for the purple-poetic-love.....

I always knew you were a 'tease' flashin' hot lil ass pass my hungry gaze, I may as well go 'primal'
n' take a piece O that meat,
n' leave u melted from my blaze lol
Whew, damn my sweetest Rain, this was INSANELY HOTT!!!

*hand to chest, bats eyelashes* Who me?! A tease?! Give this man a cigar, he's absolutely correct! *giggles*
Now, about the rest of your comment; translation please! lol...... adore you Rich, Thank ya!

Rain your  tease got me going in a primal way. The imagery seduced me into an erotic trance. I loved being teased by your poem. It whetted my appetite.

John

John,  I'm always elated when a new face drop off a little poetic-love, sprinkling positive vibes. So happy I could tease you.  :) Thank you kind sir and I’m beaming that you decided to keep her on your cyber bookshelf…

Well, now how in the world do you keep up with all this love my darling Rainbow?
I as always love all your poetry and this is no exception.


Jezzes Fook, I'm just sayin!

mushroom tip of irresistible-mischief, smiles and glisten
at the naughty ways portrayed by willful submission <---  WHAM!
one slow thrust, in tight restriction, with frenzy friction
within glossed walls constricted, on rigid member,
that pulled back with rapture slack...
prepping a blissful reentry with a second plunge -  <---   Just WOW!
subconsciously stunned, <---
because...

U tease you!
Jackie xoxox

aww Jackie, you do make my heart swell with joy when you come bearing poetic gifts  through words.
Your endless syntax-support has never went unnoticed in my eyes. Thank you so much sweet friend. xo
#SouthernLoveSent.com

Oh my word!!!
Fanning,
May I just please bask in that ambience of yours!? You words forever do something to me and make my cheeks turn up and blush ( You're just that Amazing) ❤️ My head was nodding , I was vibing and it felt as if you were reading it in my mind with that voice.. Yyeessss💋 Hugs and love beautiful

lol...hey there sexy mama. Glad you were rocking to the vibe of my tease. I wouldn't mind sitting back in a chair, wearing just a smile, watching me tease 'him'. (....moans included) ;)  Your sweet presence on my page always add an extra oomph to my spirit. Thank you lil sis!  #HuggingYouTight.com

wow!, dont start nothing round here, lol, "provoking vanilla oil from a slippery cave
" what an image and feeling provoking line, amazing, i have missed your imperial imagination goddess...

.....and my ink has missed you equally! Love when I stir your mind Dean! I don't plan on stopping either... :) thanks hon....

Reading rapidly, excitedly, then arrive at this "mushroom tip of irresistible-mischief" and erupt in joyful laughter! What an amazingly perfect description!

lol....Thrilled you received a thrill form my words. ;) Thank you so much for the read shellc.....