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Tell Me You Want To...
to kiss
the
moon
in my
eye's
to stride
along
my dewy
petals
to linger
above
my pretty
pleasures
to hear
my
pillow moan
softly
to live
inside
my nakedness
passionately
the
moon
in my
eye's
to stride
along
my dewy
petals
to linger
above
my pretty
pleasures
to hear
my
pillow moan
softly
to live
inside
my nakedness
passionately
Published 25th Jan 2016
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25th Jan 2016 10:22pm
"To live inside my nakedness" What a delicious passage illustrating deep, intense passion! Bravisima bella poeta!
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26th Jan 2016 1:24am
Beautiful imagery and wording Tommie. And I really like the progression from the moon above all the way down to your pillow then finally, you. Excellent work!
26th Jan 2016 5:21am
Thank you Crowfly.
So glad you enjoyed this little piece.
I appreciate it so much. 😊
So glad you enjoyed this little piece.
I appreciate it so much. 😊
26th Jan 2016 4:22am
such an artful & sensual proposition, Tommie,
but there are no simple answers...
but there are no simple answers...
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26th Jan 2016 2:29pm
I want... I want... I want all that.
Very hypnotic chant tommielynn. One I could hummm to often.
Very hypnotic chant tommielynn. One I could hummm to often.
26th Jan 2016 7:16pm
27th Jan 2016 9:17pm
Whoa! Love the way you write this. It's so simply put and straightforward and that only adds to the building intensity
27th Jan 2016 9:43pm
