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Miss Fortune
He decides to roll the dice
Offers her a line
Anything to break the ice
"Perhaps a little wine"
She decides to play along
Let him have his way
He looks like he's fairly strong
And can fuck 'til light of day
So they take a cab back to his lair
"Perhaps for a nightcap"
But the scent of sulfur in the air
Indicates some type of trap
She decides she'd best obey
As he drags her off to bed
Looks like this will be a lengthy stay
And that's all that need be said.
Offers her a line
Anything to break the ice
"Perhaps a little wine"
She decides to play along
Let him have his way
He looks like he's fairly strong
And can fuck 'til light of day
So they take a cab back to his lair
"Perhaps for a nightcap"
But the scent of sulfur in the air
Indicates some type of trap
She decides she'd best obey
As he drags her off to bed
Looks like this will be a lengthy stay
And that's all that need be said.
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Re. Miss Fortune
21st Jan 2016 7:13pm
Sleepin with the debil eh?
Not my scene...but what an engaging poem thomas. I really like this...
Her helplessness..as if it were fated.
Really nice work...
And always so good to see and read you. I cherish you babydoll.
All of my tight love t Crow. Gimme a ring.
Jennifer
Not my scene...but what an engaging poem thomas. I really like this...
Her helplessness..as if it were fated.
Really nice work...
And always so good to see and read you. I cherish you babydoll.
All of my tight love t Crow. Gimme a ring.
Jennifer
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Re: Re. Miss Fortune
21st Jan 2016 7:50pm
It's not really my scene either Jen. I meant this as a cautionary tale, but no big deal. Thank you!
Re. Miss Fortune
21st Jan 2016 7:59pm
Re. Miss Fortune
21st Jan 2016 11:51pm
Hmmm, seems he's seized him a tender victim to do as he pleases.. delicious ink! - blue angel
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Re. Miss Fortune
Anonymous
21st Jan 2016 11:59pm
She danced with the Devil, drank his wine. . .Did she really think she was going to get away that fast?. . .Hmm. . .Maybe next time [if there is] she won't judge a body by it's cover;). . .Brutal wicked, & yes, erotic. . .Enjoyed, Sir Fly. . .~xo, Devlin.
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Re. Miss Fortune
22nd Jan 2016 2:35am
Oooooooo Crow.....a bit of a mystery write......still provoking thoughts....enjoyed the night......xo :)
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Re. Miss Fortune
22nd Jan 2016 5:46am
This is really good with a perfect end. Excellent!!! Your rhyming is spot on.
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Re. Miss Fortune
22nd Jan 2016 6:52am
the camera pans away as it begins to get very real.
can't beat a co-operative pick-up...
can't beat a co-operative pick-up...
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Re. Miss Fortune
22nd Jan 2016 1:51pm
i really love the wordplay in the title, crowfly ^.^ so darn clever! it lures one into the game of chance between your lines
dig it
xo
dig it
xo
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22nd Jan 2016 4:25pm
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Re. Miss Fortune
26th Jan 2016 9:58pm
Frightening! There's always a cooost to enlightenment in your work Crowfly!
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