The Church of Harsh Truth

Whoa!!! Kitty cat! I have never seen the likes from you....its an awesome piece....just hope it is fiction..  
First..love the title...  
Then POW! First line you come out swingin and do not stop movin till the knockout...  
   
Yet you been with that preacher an    
I know that for a fact    
Self righteous bastard, holy Joe    
I saw you’s in the act    
   
Great verse...and you know i love when people write their dialect.  
You are very versitile...no two pieces the same. There are many talents here that seem to do the same thing every piece...become very predictable. Would much rather see a stinker or two because a writer is challenging themselves with new ideas and style.    
I dont think ive ever seen ypu lay a rotten one.  
   
There is nothing more loathsome to.me than cheating on a spouse.   But if you are denied sex in marriage...it is part their fault...and then they are throwin strange to the preacher! Ho shi!
My husband and i were falling apart...he wouldnt make love to me for years. Couldnt get his cock up and wouldnt go to the doc for help.  
I told him i couldnt take a celebant marriage and was going to start dating...i hated myself for that..  
   
If you are in the place you need to sleep around...it needs to be over or be honest and work on it.    
People dont hold marriage as sacred anymore.    
Sexting cheating...its done without any remorse...grrrr....this got me thinking....so fucking strong and very well written.    
You are so talented kitty cat. A top 5 fav on this site for sure.    
   
Love you to death my pet  
Purrs and kisses all over your funny mug  
Jen

You said it Jen I remember a church back in the Eighties all happy-clappy touchy-feely justa-priasin' the lord and most of them were having it off with those members "other than their spouses" shall we say? More fuckin' faces than Big Ben.
Thanks for the comment baby. :-)

Wow funnyman! I freakin' love the fuse of this ink! I also love this diverse side of your pen's personality. Don't you just hate it when it's the 'church folks' who always preach to the choir, as if they're living saintly and they turn out to be scum? I also hate it when folks who are walking-talking garbage, tries to pass judgement, when they should live in a wash-rinse-repeat cycle; forever cleansing their smelly bodies and foul souls.  
Love it babe,...... and thanks again for the pm laugh, you always make me smile.  xo

You're right Rain holy Joe's who preach one thing and do another are always abhorrent . I used to have a guy who knocked on my door regular. I called him a Jehovah's witless. and he was harmless compared with some of his congregation who were kiddy fiddlers.  
 
I dropped a short story on Confucianism (Sounds unexciting don't it?) on here. I might impose it on you  and risk your wrath ;-)  
 Luv & hugz,  
Tony

JUST BRILLIANT...

It's spoken with so much emotion that you can't help but stay captivated all the way through...

"I looked through the window
After church the other day
You were kneeling down before him
An’ you weren’t there to pray

Then you dragged your drawers off
And leaned across a pew
Never did that kinda action
When we used to screw "

That has got to be my favourite verses read... I look forward to reading more of your pieces.

Thanks for your kind remarks my friend it's alway nice to hear a positive reaction to one's efforts. I feel I ought to warn you though that a lot of my stuff is comedy!
 Big smiles to ya!