Her Essence~

......divinely written.  The powers of "her" (metaphorically) poetic flow, what a love.  The thankfulness of her saving grace.  A very intrinsic poem from one of favorite writers and favorite people.  

aww.....thanks Archie, sweet comment! :) Poetry does have a redeeming quality in regards to it's power. She's saved me countless times by penning, instead of reacting emotionally. Happy you're keeping her.....

"This is breathtaking and I can't even find the words to comment how memorized and enraptured I was reading it."
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^^^^^^^^I think you just did! :) Your entire comment touched me deeply, Sonsista!  My sincere thanks for the poetic-love, and shelving her in your cyber library.....  

Quite a beautiful and divine write you made here.
Keep up the good work :)

Why thankya kindly MsRJ! :) Been quite a while since you graced my page with your gentleness. I'll see ya soon!

This is stunningly beautiful ...

Stunning, like you je! :) Thank you beautiful spirit! Much respect to you and your craft, appreciate your endless support. Thanks for listing her luv!

this is exquisite in texture...
challenging in concept  
original in presentation...
you write the rites Ms Rain. ..
very very lovely indeed...

Grand commentary you've left me Naajir! I'm just trying to follow your poetic lead fella. :)
Always a pleasure to feel your ink love....

May the force be with you... though if Metachlorians had anything to do with creating poetry, Yoda would not have been the only Jedi-poet...
No, the force of poetry come from a mysterious muse that flows through human hearts and saturates our minds with a rhythm we transmit with a beat that is a language unto itself. You make love to your muse with every poem you create and the muse in you is addicted to your verse! So am I...
JJ

lol.... an entertaining intro JJ. I'm clueless to Star Wars, never been a fan. I know, I know....go head and boo me. lol... I do get the 'force' analogy though. Quite complimentary to your wonderful perception of this ink.

"You make love to your muse with every poem you create and the muse in you is addicted to your verse! So am I..."   <--- Wow! Love it!  ;) Thank you sweety for the pen-love, and for taking her home.

how could any writer not love this piece, rain?
awesome weave of literature and life. ;)
thanks for the read

hey there miki, so happy your poetic reflection can relate to this ink.  :)  Love feeling your lyrical energy around my poesy part of town. Thanks for the read.....

Agree completely with Miki here
n add, I'm soooooo familiar with 'her force' n truly always as you
feel SAVED by it! :)... Perfectly spilled silky smooth ink! :)

aww.....thanks so much Rich! Happy you're familiar with her force, it's truly something to be  reckoned with.  Your nod of approval is felt.....

Ahhh, rain1courtel, luv ~ :-*

I came and read as I am wont to do with your works and left again pondering and blissfully o'erwhelmed. (Incidentally, I liked the first picture better, luv, though this one is lovely as well)

Have you any idea, really, how truly talented you are, luv? Any idea of the prowess of your mind? This piece is incroyable as are you.  

Your profundity moves me... :-*

hey sexy Savaja, I'm always held captivate by your comment(s). I was rather fond of the first pic myself, but there was too much going on in it and it took away from the quote, not to mention I needed 'her' to be seen more, her fullness, the force of seduction she brings. This was my initial pic but I opted for the one you liked. Thank you hun for always blessing my ink with your poetic intellect. :)


Edit: Thank you for taking her home with you... xoxo

I can't begin to tell you how much I can relate and appreciate this piece. You are a goddess of the pen

Bale, so wonderful to see you my friend! :) Poets who can relate to this means my pen captured the attention of its intended muse(s). Thank you for the rhythmic- love....

if one doesn't feel or carry the very essence of this in their bones, they need to lay down their pen & make room for folks like you... who scrape together life, love, heartbreak... who breathe to exhale in metaphor
yuuuuup, rainy lady, you've written this so damn well.
i'ma have to write an eviction notice on my reading list to make room for this keeper
xoxox

.....dancedoll, I've already mentioned earlier how poets like you and several others have been the inspiration behind me constantly critiquing my craft, in a way that allows me to design my ink in the likeness of so many I respect, grooming me into a better poet. You're definitely at the top of my inspiration list. :) Thank you for the amazing comment, and for babysitting her. xoxo

This is a stunning piece Rain. A masterful and thought provoking pen.  Beautiful :) x

Mag, I'm really stoked to see you lovely lady! ;) Just a joy to feel your energy at my front door..
Thank you for the poetic support and for placing her on your bookshelf. Means a lot......

Words chosen so deep and meaningful from poetry heaven...
Shakespeare would be envious. Always great ink Tara miss ya

....Well would you look at what the poetic wind blew in! ;)   (((( Smiles ))))
Hey there fella, been way too long! You have been in my thoughts, friend! Your voice has been missed by me and I 'm sure many others. We've got to catch up! Thanks luv, I'm happy you're keeping her....

an ode to the muse who sparks your poetical bonfires.
exceptional poetry...

John, the vibe you  give-off warms like a soothing hymn I constantly want to hear. Thank you so much!

love the sultry style its conveyed in, infatuated with the internal rhyme to the poet's beau,  "Her ascendants caress the strands of  
muted linguistics and lure my roar," the whole thing blazing but those lines kill to me... magnifique goddess...

Your comments are always so beautifully poetic... ;) Thank you so very much Dean!

Your words like liquid silk flowing in a poetic stream smooth as cream as in a dream.so it would seem.
Beautiful composition M'lady. Respect to you and your pen mistress of my mind. :-)

Oh my Tony! Poetry in motion via your comment! ;)  Love it, my friend! Much Respect babe!
#Hug&Kisses

Ms. Rain,
 This such a beautiful written
piece. Thorough enjoy the language throughout. So much to process, complicated and stunning write.
Forced, no wanted to read several times to gain true clarity.

Thanks for such a thought
provoking write

Keith

hey there Knot! :)  Thank you sweety for stopping by and tackling her essence. I do understand the complicacy of her. I'm actually kinda' proud that she provoked thought in you. :)  I was trying to infuse various forms of poetry into being  a female entity that possess the power to invoke the voice of my inner thoughts. :) Hope I didn't confuse you even more with my explanation. lol....Thanks hun, appreciate your kind words.....

This has richness and elegance Rain.  It celebrates the inspiration of your muse but contains so much more.

"I just can’t help but love her Carpe diem force.  
She has never forced me poetically  
rather, her force, constantly....    
saves me."

This is a thrill to read and far from being forced.  It flies.  Beautiful work!  

aww Crow, merci beaucoup! ;) I love your comment, and I'm so thrilled you decided to take her home with you.
I appreciate you immensely! Pen Respect~

Ooh seizing the poetic moment, Rain! She has thoroughly raped my mind with her ambiguous kisses and metered ambivalence. Just love this tribute to the art in ink! -blue angel

My dear blue angel, your beautiful words are poetry skating! So smooth and lovely! Thank you for such a awesome comment...

you really can do no wrong! always in awe...curtsy bow:)

...oh goodness, you are too generous, lovely Feen! Wowed by you! Curtsy bow backatcha! xo

Got you moving and hooked on my curtsy bow - why - because we simply can...love what you do..

I bow to you....You sweet Rain, are a wonder to behold...I often think of a scene in my mind of a little brick room filled with poets & writers who one by one would stand and say one of their poems,,,,you are The sensual one....without even a word written in a sexual way the depth and feel of your work just strikes me like the soft paw of a lioness...I truly love your work.

No, it is you I must bow to, for sharing such an amazing compliment about my work. I can't tell you how warm my eyes and heart have shined from reading your words. I'm loving your work as well as your vibrant personality. Pleased you've decided to take her home with you!  Merci beaucoup....  ;)