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Knock, Knock (You're gonna wanna read this)
Hey, knock knock! Who's there?
Hike! Hike who? Not quite, you need...
Five more syllables!
Author's note: I'm here all night, folks.
P.S.
I kill me.
Hike! Hike who? Not quite, you need...
Five more syllables!
Author's note: I'm here all night, folks.
P.S.
I kill me.
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Re. Knock, Knock (You're gonna wanna read this)
14th Jan 2016 3:41am
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Re. Knock, Knock (You're gonna wanna read this)
16th Jan 2016 11:09pm
Flew right over my head this one. It did!
I've been off to my strange wanderings too long it seems. My sense of humour lags and drags itself behind me like a lazy dog. It'll come around but I'd have to wait for it.
I've been off to my strange wanderings too long it seems. My sense of humour lags and drags itself behind me like a lazy dog. It'll come around but I'd have to wait for it.
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Re: Re. Knock, Knock (You're gonna wanna read this)
17th Jan 2016 00:34am
Allow me to enlighten you unto the genius of this superb knock knock joke: ;)
See, there are two individuals as represented by the bold and italics. We'll call them b and i. When i replies "Hike who", it sounds like "haiku". Therefore, the comedic genius, b, (a metaphor for yours truly) corrects i that there are not enough syllables for a haiku, but in doing so, he answers in such a way that the entire conversation is in fact a haiku. The end result is a beautiful Senryu which combines a knock knock joke, a pun, and a good deal of irony in 17 syllable of poetic prowless.
Humbly yours,
Moe
See, there are two individuals as represented by the bold and italics. We'll call them b and i. When i replies "Hike who", it sounds like "haiku". Therefore, the comedic genius, b, (a metaphor for yours truly) corrects i that there are not enough syllables for a haiku, but in doing so, he answers in such a way that the entire conversation is in fact a haiku. The end result is a beautiful Senryu which combines a knock knock joke, a pun, and a good deal of irony in 17 syllable of poetic prowless.
Humbly yours,
Moe
Re: Re. Knock, Knock (You're gonna wanna read this)
30th Jan 2016 8:36pm
I sit enlightened. It's funny. And witty.
Thanks for taking sparing the time.
Thanks for taking sparing the time.
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27th Mar 2016 8:18pm
Re. Knock, Knock (You're gonna wanna read this)
7th Jun 2016 4:42pm
Lol, ok I must admit.. that I'm not
good with forms, am very very
un;orthodox but reading this and
laughing for the humor actually
help me understand exactly how
haikus are created.
Wow, I feel to try now, at least once lol.
overall this was in'joyed
-Howlings
good with forms, am very very
un;orthodox but reading this and
laughing for the humor actually
help me understand exactly how
haikus are created.
Wow, I feel to try now, at least once lol.
overall this was in'joyed
-Howlings
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