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I Gotta Have You
These dreams I have
of you....
Your open mouth,
my breasts cupped
in your hands
Your pulse penetrating
inside of me....
I was your object,
you would fade
into my neckline
One strong hand on my
hip while the other....
Twisted in my hair,
you behind me
I was yours
Your strokes won't
silence me....
My smokey voice,
calling to you
out to God
In turn makes you
growl deeply....
Pushing your way,
further and faster
up and in
Until you white wash
the inside of....
My treasure trove,
leaving me sweaty
and you sticky sweet
of you....
Your open mouth,
my breasts cupped
in your hands
Your pulse penetrating
inside of me....
I was your object,
you would fade
into my neckline
One strong hand on my
hip while the other....
Twisted in my hair,
you behind me
I was yours
Your strokes won't
silence me....
My smokey voice,
calling to you
out to God
In turn makes you
growl deeply....
Pushing your way,
further and faster
up and in
Until you white wash
the inside of....
My treasure trove,
leaving me sweaty
and you sticky sweet
Published 12th Jan 2016
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13th Jan 2016 00:53am
Damn! This poem gets down to the nitty-gritty without
falling back on all those nasty words some feel so
necessary to write, you know like "P" "C" "A" and all
the rest. This poem proves you can write exotic and
not having to repeat the same old, same old.words
we see everyday. Thank you for a little class . . .
falling back on all those nasty words some feel so
necessary to write, you know like "P" "C" "A" and all
the rest. This poem proves you can write exotic and
not having to repeat the same old, same old.words
we see everyday. Thank you for a little class . . .
13th Jan 2016 2:27am
I agree and I am guilty as hell of being one of those people, I try not to but sometimes the poem calls for them.
When I write like this I feel it gives the reader more to think about. I hope anyway. Thank you for such a wonderful comment standingmyground, it means a lot 😊
When I write like this I feel it gives the reader more to think about. I hope anyway. Thank you for such a wonderful comment standingmyground, it means a lot 😊
13th Jan 2016 8:58am
13th Jan 2016 4:55pm
Echo standingmyground. Sure that would get the man you think about here coming running, and showing he's right behind you (getting into puns here). Inspired rhyming comment:
Another wildest dream laid bare;
Would it matter he had no hair,
As long as with you he took care?
Another wildest dream laid bare;
Would it matter he had no hair,
As long as with you he took care?
13th Jan 2016 4:57pm
15th Jan 2016 11:11pm
I have just posted in this section a poem called Animal Desire which I began writing long ago but was inspired to finish off after reading this poem.
13th Jan 2016 4:38pm
13th Jan 2016 4:59pm
