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Fuck this prim, poised affectation
Pluck my fucking peacock feathers bare
Stroke my downy peach fuzz raw
Fuck me new again
Pluck my fucking peacock feathers bare
Stroke my downy peach fuzz raw
Fuck me new again
Published 11th Jan 2016
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11th Jan 2016 1:21pm
welcome - to DU (short form - Deep Underground) - thank you for adding my words to your RL (short form Reading List) -
I love economy of words - I love that you say so much in so few...
glad you have decided to join us...
look forward to more poems...
I love economy of words - I love that you say so much in so few...
glad you have decided to join us...
look forward to more poems...
11th Jan 2016 8:09pm
14th Jan 2016 9:21pm
which came first...the chicken or you...JK...nice way to express yourself....Baptism by fornication.
16th Jan 2016 9:29pm
I love it but I think the "fucking" in the 2nd line is unnecessary and it reads better without it
16th Jan 2016 11:26pm
Thanks. I like it for punctuation. Also the rhythm of it. Also, the "F". Also the alliteration with pluck fucking / peacock feathers. I did retype this without it and gave it a little thought, but I think we'll have to agree to disagree.
