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"Kisses with Tongues of Fire"
When they "Made Love" it was so intense
that they both "Spoke in Tongues;" tongues
of fire that burned them completely up
Every "Well-rounded" erotic inch of her exotic
body that he Kissed, exploded with eruptions
that ignited bright blue-white flames, at a
temperature of 5260 degrees
When him she Kissed, all his former thoughts
to her succulence did relent; the breath that
exhaled from her lungs, passionately with
fervent heat, engraved into his hardened
flesh tattoos without needle or ink
Tongues, Fire, spiritualistic in the Realm, Desire
that they both "Spoke in Tongues;" tongues
of fire that burned them completely up
Every "Well-rounded" erotic inch of her exotic
body that he Kissed, exploded with eruptions
that ignited bright blue-white flames, at a
temperature of 5260 degrees
When him she Kissed, all his former thoughts
to her succulence did relent; the breath that
exhaled from her lungs, passionately with
fervent heat, engraved into his hardened
flesh tattoos without needle or ink
Tongues, Fire, spiritualistic in the Realm, Desire
Published 11th Jan 2016
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11th Jan 2016 5:07am
12th Jan 2016 7:28pm
Thank You WiccanGoddess15.
I'm happy that you enjoyed my
ode here.
I hope that you get the more that
you want... if there's anything that
I can do to help you get more then
just let me know.
Dantalion
I'm happy that you enjoyed my
ode here.
I hope that you get the more that
you want... if there's anything that
I can do to help you get more then
just let me know.
Dantalion
11th Jan 2016 5:20am
12th Jan 2016 7:29pm
I Thank You GroovySteroids.
Happy that my write was pleasing
to you.
Dantalion
Happy that my write was pleasing
to you.
Dantalion
11th Jan 2016 9:55am
Hot, pic and poem together. How much the tongue can do. Thought of rhyming caption:
Sheetless we lie on top of the bed,
I'm on my back while you show your head,
Kissing me, between my naked thighs
As you make the heat of our passions rise.
You hold me down with hand on left breast;
Keep up your kissing, give me no rest.
Sheetless we lie on top of the bed,
I'm on my back while you show your head,
Kissing me, between my naked thighs
As you make the heat of our passions rise.
You hold me down with hand on left breast;
Keep up your kissing, give me no rest.
12th Jan 2016 7:33pm
Thank you one more time
for your thoughtful comments
Solomon_S.
I liked the potential addition
that you offered to compliment
this piece; I'll see if I can write
it in.
Appreciate You... Dantalion
for your thoughtful comments
Solomon_S.
I liked the potential addition
that you offered to compliment
this piece; I'll see if I can write
it in.
Appreciate You... Dantalion
Anonymous
11th Jan 2016 11:05am
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12th Jan 2016 7:26pm
Ah Gabriel it is so good to
hear from you again.
I am glad that you enjoyed
this one.
Hope to hear from you again
soon.
Thank You... Dantalion
hear from you again.
I am glad that you enjoyed
this one.
Hope to hear from you again
soon.
Thank You... Dantalion
Wow Pan....fantastic hot write......very visual and sexy......great lines thru out.....really enjoyed this......thank you for pointing me here.....tipping my pen in respect to your talent.....xo :)
Anonymous
20th Feb 2016 00:33am
I'm experiencing a
shortage of airs Dantalion
Adored
Potent of kisses of fire
shortage of airs Dantalion
Adored
Potent of kisses of fire
20th Feb 2016 10:51pm
Leashing, I am very happy that
this little ode of mine to the Power
and capability of the Tongue has
left You with an shortage of Breath.
There's an old saying that goes...
"The Tongue is a World of its own
and can set on Fire the Course of
the World"
Well the only Fire that I know that I
want it to set, and the only World that
I want it to set on Fire is the Warm Body
that I'm using it on.
I thank You though for reading this write
of mine and how it has affected You... Pan
this little ode of mine to the Power
and capability of the Tongue has
left You with an shortage of Breath.
There's an old saying that goes...
"The Tongue is a World of its own
and can set on Fire the Course of
the World"
Well the only Fire that I know that I
want it to set, and the only World that
I want it to set on Fire is the Warm Body
that I'm using it on.
I thank You though for reading this write
of mine and how it has affected You... Pan
Anonymous
20th Feb 2016 10:56pm
Beautifully conveyed Pan,
it's sincerely heart and soul
touching.
A Rarity.
it's sincerely heart and soul
touching.
A Rarity.
