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Wanting Duality
Passion Suppressed
Memory Oppressed
the Soul now Distressed.
I Thought I did my Best
Now to Become a Beast
the Poet not Impressed.
In Madness I Seek Sanctuary
but Fall to more Sin and Debauchery.
Meaning Forgotten
the Heart turned Rotten.
Changed for Eternity
Hating, Loathing all in Infinity
Paranoia, Anger, Greed, Envy growing Infinitely.
Just Seeking Simplicity
to Live or Love in Duality
and not
Alone
Memory Oppressed
the Soul now Distressed.
I Thought I did my Best
Now to Become a Beast
the Poet not Impressed.
In Madness I Seek Sanctuary
but Fall to more Sin and Debauchery.
Meaning Forgotten
the Heart turned Rotten.
Changed for Eternity
Hating, Loathing all in Infinity
Paranoia, Anger, Greed, Envy growing Infinitely.
Just Seeking Simplicity
to Live or Love in Duality
and not
Alone
Published 23rd Nov 2009
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10th Jun 2011 10:42pm
To me (IMO) this is quite the potent piece. I do not know if that is what you meant for this, but as the reader, i took from it a sense of being \'unsure\' or unable to trust in your own feelings.
\'\'I Thought I did my Best
Now to Become a Beast
the Poet not Impressed.\'\'
I enjoyed this immensely Mr V.
Thank you for the read
\'\'I Thought I did my Best
Now to Become a Beast
the Poet not Impressed.\'\'
I enjoyed this immensely Mr V.
Thank you for the read
10th Jun 2011 10:45pm
This is a feeling from one of a few depressive and lonely moments. It is meant to be about being unsure, apart from the last few lines; those stand a true desire and wish.
3rd Aug 2012 4:07am
