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Make Love To Me ~
Make love to me
Tear my sighs apart
Turn me into flames
Lets ignite the room
Make love to me
Feel my flesh pass across yours
Make love to me
I've invited you here
The night becomes noisy
We use word's never spoken
Make love to me
Like you're a poet and I'm you're muse
Tear my sighs apart
Turn me into flames
Lets ignite the room
Make love to me
Feel my flesh pass across yours
Make love to me
I've invited you here
The night becomes noisy
We use word's never spoken
Make love to me
Like you're a poet and I'm you're muse
Published 9th Jan 2016
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9th Jan 2016 5:57am
9th Jan 2016 6:46pm
9th Jan 2016 8:20am
poets do it w/fierce romance,
& metaphors you can't even imagine.
you make desirable poetry, Tommie...
& metaphors you can't even imagine.
you make desirable poetry, Tommie...
9th Jan 2016 6:48pm
9th Jan 2016 9:39am
Echo JF and XMar. Another wildest dream outpouring but leaving plenty to imagination.
9th Jan 2016 6:52pm
Creating poems that the reader needs to think about are so much fun. Leaving the reader to fill in whatever they want. I do love writing the right down to the point dirty one's too! Thanks SS 😊
9th Jan 2016 10:37am
You had me with "tear my sighs apart"
Bravo!
Lovely and passionate ink.
Bravo!
Lovely and passionate ink.
9th Jan 2016 6:54pm
9th Jan 2016 11:08am
Love it Tommie, succinct yet cram packed with passion. Absolutely adore the third stanza.
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9th Jan 2016 8:00pm
I love this little poem. "Tear my sighs apart " is just a wonderful line and perhaps my favorite.
9th Jan 2016 8:53pm
Anonymous
12th Jan 2016 7:38pm
You had me at the title.
The rest was pure metaphoric sexual intoxication.
I agree great passion
The rest was pure metaphoric sexual intoxication.
I agree great passion
