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Rockin Your Memory
had a dream the other night
it brought my mind back to you
of how sweet it was between us
although we've never
personally touched in the flesh
my soul feels you as if we have
sit here rockin your memory
playing our song and humming along
with my heart swaying with the tune
close my eyes and there you are
reaching your hand to me for a dance
I except and rise in to your arms
our bodies tight together
in one motion we sway so smoothly
becoming one by the next chorus
looking in to your eyes I feel romance
tender words never spoken
but whispered in a glimpse
I open my eyes to only see
that your just in my memory
so I will stay right here in this old chair
rockin your memory
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
it brought my mind back to you
of how sweet it was between us
although we've never
personally touched in the flesh
my soul feels you as if we have
sit here rockin your memory
playing our song and humming along
with my heart swaying with the tune
close my eyes and there you are
reaching your hand to me for a dance
I except and rise in to your arms
our bodies tight together
in one motion we sway so smoothly
becoming one by the next chorus
looking in to your eyes I feel romance
tender words never spoken
but whispered in a glimpse
I open my eyes to only see
that your just in my memory
so I will stay right here in this old chair
rockin your memory
Copyright © 2016 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
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Re. Rockin Your Memory
This was such an ethereal embodiment of magical moments. And doesn't if feel good to at least be able to reminisce over sighs captured in time, where everything seemed peaceful in your world? I love your reflection purple princess! xo
"although we've never
personally touched in the flesh
my soul feels you as if we have" <-- I've always coined a statement like this as; 'your mind can take you places physicality can't even reach'! ;)
"although we've never
personally touched in the flesh
my soul feels you as if we have" <-- I've always coined a statement like this as; 'your mind can take you places physicality can't even reach'! ;)
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8th Jan 2016 4:14am
Lady Rain......you've touched my heart and soul with your beautiful words......I felt so serene writing this one cause I can now look back on memories without tears dripping in my heart......it feels wonderful!!! Thank you my sweet friend.....sending purple pen luv your way xo :)
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8th Jan 2016 4:37am
Happy New Year Sweet PM!! So happy to see your smile on my page.....thank you for your sweet words.....glad you liked the pic and my ink......xo :)
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7th Jan 2016 6:52pm
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8th Jan 2016 4:46am
Thank you Moe.....I'm so happy you like my ink......my heart was very calm writing this one......appreciate you xo :)
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7th Jan 2016 10:54pm
Oh my Flower, what a precious moment. Stanza 3 & 4 stole my heart ; )
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8th Jan 2016 4:48am
Sexy Lena.....thank you so very much for your words amd beautiful smile upon my page......you always lift my spirits...glad this touched you xo :)
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10th Jan 2016 1:28am
Hi Sweet S......luved writting this.....it's great to beable to feel old memories and have no tears.....just thoughts.....beautiful feeling.....thank you for yiur gracious words to me....always pleased to see your smile....luv and hugs xo :)
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9th Jan 2016 6:17am
You made me feel the want and disappointment of love lost. It is a whisper we all hear. You captured it very well.
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10th Jan 2016 1:40am
Hi X......I'm super thrilled to see your smile upon my page.....hope that all is well with you. Sorry I made you sad......I felt really good writting this though.....caus the memories that came back to me didn't hurt me any more.....that's a good thing......thank you for sharing your thoughts with me.....xo :)
Re. Rockin Your Memory
10th Jan 2016 3:07pm
Such a sweet motion in this morning read! I can feel the closeness and emotional fit here! :)
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10th Jan 2016 8:48pm
Awe ST......happy to have had a precious moment in your morning.....thank you xo :)