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Outlander Abandoned (347)
You,
kind, caring conspirator
sole soul sister
seeing what we share
entwined
still wrapped around
your
intense intent
looking for your login
knowing never
again
contented connection
obsessive, obscene openness
closed off, cloistered, compartmentalize
deny deviance
back to basics
hiding,
no longer double
just a helix
circling itself
circling the drain
discarded
Published 3rd Jan 2016
| Edited 2nd Feb 2016
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8th Jan 2016 8:07am
Words like login make me wonder just how intense the anger is---for it seems that the communication is via electronic devices. The most vivid expressions of displeasure typically are person to person. Further word use reminds me of a more mechanical, non human nature.
10th Jan 2016 6:10pm
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10th Jan 2016 6:19pm
