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Want To......
come closer to me my luv
want to look into your eyes
see my reflection in you
when you whisper to me
want to watch your lips
saying words of sweetness
kiss me again so softly
want to feel your passion
as our lips embrace in luv
wrap your arms around me
want to feel your heart beat
beating in sync with mine
let's dance this very moment
want to feel us move together
swaying in the soft moonlight
Copyright © 2015 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
want to look into your eyes
see my reflection in you
when you whisper to me
want to watch your lips
saying words of sweetness
kiss me again so softly
want to feel your passion
as our lips embrace in luv
wrap your arms around me
want to feel your heart beat
beating in sync with mine
let's dance this very moment
want to feel us move together
swaying in the soft moonlight
Copyright © 2015 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
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Re: Re. Want To......
25th Dec 2015 7:30pm
Thank you my friend......you're much encouragement to me......glad you encouraged me back here......xo :)
Re. Want To......
Anonymous
25th Dec 2015 3:07pm
To write a poem such as this, Flower, means, to me,
you have much love inside you to freely give to one
lucky guy. Merry Christmas to you, and I hope you
have a wonderful day!
you have much love inside you to freely give to one
lucky guy. Merry Christmas to you, and I hope you
have a wonderful day!
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Re: Re. Want To......
25th Dec 2015 7:39pm
Merry Christmas Scooter.......thank you for your words.....I'm always blessed by them.......there is a lot hiding in this simple soul of mine......appreciate your luv and support xo :)
Re. Want To......
26th Dec 2015 00:22am
There about twenty songs I could easily compare this to. I enjoyed the way to ended with moonlight.
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Re: Re. Want To......
26th Dec 2015 1:07am
Re. Want To......
26th Dec 2015 1:31am
flowergirl this is an truly genuine and
gentle exhibition of a Beautiful soul.
The way you write it takes me back
about 20 years when life was more
pleasurable and full of excitement.
It still has its moments but there's nothing
that replaces having lived in it.
Thank You for the tribute... Pan
gentle exhibition of a Beautiful soul.
The way you write it takes me back
about 20 years when life was more
pleasurable and full of excitement.
It still has its moments but there's nothing
that replaces having lived in it.
Thank You for the tribute... Pan
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Re: Re. Want To......
26th Dec 2015 1:49am
Thank you Pan.....I enjoyed writting this one......my sou felt very calm and peaceful......glad that my words portray that.....happy it took you back to good times......can relate to your words......appreciate seeing your smile upon my page once again xo :)
Re. Want To......
26th Dec 2015 3:00am
it's a very sensuous dance that goes beyond dancing.
seductive poetry...
seductive poetry...
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Re: Re. Want To......
26th Dec 2015 3:08am
Thank you John....a big compliment coming from a master of words such as you......humbled by your smile upon my page......xo :)
Re. Want To......
26th Dec 2015 7:39pm
You're poetry always refreshes me Flower. It's always a pleasure to see love requited. You look into his eyes and see your reflection right there with his soul. Beautiful work!
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Re: Re. Want To......
27th Dec 2015 1:57am
Awe Crow.......you always make me feel so honored by your words......you're one of the reasons I came back here.....thank you for makin my heart smile......xo :)