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Winter Blues
something missing
without you
feeling down
winter blues
just yesterday
it seems
reflections
happy memories
constant struggle
when at war
crazy demons
haunting souls
always here
heartbeat away
my pulse
beating for two
conversation
between the lines
we click
lonely without
your next write
brings hope
i’ll wait
an eternity
spill some ink
for me
crimson words
with precision
something missing
without you
feeling down
winter blues..
without you
feeling down
winter blues
just yesterday
it seems
reflections
happy memories
constant struggle
when at war
crazy demons
haunting souls
always here
heartbeat away
my pulse
beating for two
conversation
between the lines
we click
lonely without
your next write
brings hope
i’ll wait
an eternity
spill some ink
for me
crimson words
with precision
something missing
without you
feeling down
winter blues..
Published 22nd Dec 2015
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22nd Dec 2015 2:01am
22nd Dec 2015 4:41pm
Thanks, Red.. so glad you enjoyed.. i appreciate your kind words.. with respect..
Dave
Dave
22nd Dec 2015 2:03am
22nd Dec 2015 4:42pm
22nd Dec 2015 4:58am
Wow, Dave. I secretly wish I was the one this was written for. Felt great while reading it. Once again, loved this. It was sincerely sweet. <3
22nd Dec 2015 4:43pm
Thanks, Mysterious.. you're too kind.. i appreciate your sweet words.. and am honored by the add.. with love..
Dave
Dave
23rd Dec 2015 1:54pm
This is so passionate Dave and i feel you, it made me stop and ponder...
sad topic about a sad situation
in the list fa sure!
I hope we find her soon....
MIA is never a good thing :(
Zazzles xoxoxoxox
sad topic about a sad situation
in the list fa sure!
I hope we find her soon....
MIA is never a good thing :(
Zazzles xoxoxoxox
23rd Dec 2015 3:00pm
Thanks, Ms. Z.. for understanding this write.. as always i appreciate your kind words, and support.. and am honored by the add.. with love..
Dave
Dave
Anonymous
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24th Dec 2015 00:27am
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24th Dec 2015 4:36am
Taryn, i'm as funky as a monkey.. dropping rhymes, killing time.. i knew you'd get this.. i carry onward for her, as she would for us.. her spirit guides us, i feel her.. know you do too.. yes like a beautiful phoenix, she'll rise again.. and her warmth will hold us tight.. till we come out on the other side.. i love you too..
Dave
Dave
27th Dec 2015 2:57am
Diamond......except the dripping sound of tears......I'm sitting here in silence speechless after reading this heart felt write......I feel like I literally peeked inside your soul and read these words......beautiful and touching.....keep faith in her.....she always returns to us who luv her......luv and hugs to you.....you're a precious soul xo :)
28th Dec 2015 2:41am
Thanks, Flower.. she's a dear friend.. i know she'll return.. but waiting is difficult.. i appreciate your kind words.. with love, and respect..
Dave
Dave
