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.:Early Blurred:.

 
during re-heated nightmares
sometimes kids, the children
what they receive is a foolís fire
that, along with some uneven &
unresolved memories
the catching of bad feelings
tightly holding onto them
and wanting not to, but
sometimes thatís
just the way it is
hoping that
someone with might
that they just might
might take the terrible away
the terror of the day

perhaps today,
maybe someone, anyone †
theyíll confront whatís surreal
the knotted up experiences
the ones begot from
deficient situations
maybe adjust things
put things back into place
a worker to work a case
a corrective visit to
whatís uneven, those memories
that fire, that unwanted terror
it can be an all out Hell,
twisting knots-of-what-not, like
not pursuing a childís unsoiled vision
poorly overwrought; a failing mission
wherein sometimes and too often
the early blurred catches the burned





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kriticool
Written by kriticool
Published | Edited 18th Dec 2015
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