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Whisper It All Away
if only with just one wish
you're pain would be gone
with a soft whispered prayer
you would wake up with your soul set free
no pain in your body or within you anywhere
none from the physical or heart pain
hope you feel these purple tears
within my ink spilling luv and hugs
if only by my words I could whisper it all away
from my heart to yours xo :)
(Dedicated to so many who suffer
physically and emotionally with no cure)
Copyright © 2015 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
you're pain would be gone
with a soft whispered prayer
you would wake up with your soul set free
no pain in your body or within you anywhere
none from the physical or heart pain
hope you feel these purple tears
within my ink spilling luv and hugs
if only by my words I could whisper it all away
from my heart to yours xo :)
(Dedicated to so many who suffer
physically and emotionally with no cure)
Copyright © 2015 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
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Re. Whisper It All Away
15th Dec 2015 6:50am
.....a wonderfully written and beautiful dedication pp!
"if only with just one wish
you're pain would be gone
with a soft whispered prayer " <--love these lines....
Thank you for sharing this....
"if only with just one wish
you're pain would be gone
with a soft whispered prayer " <--love these lines....
Thank you for sharing this....
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19th Dec 2015 3:45am
Sexy Rain......thank you so much for yiur sweet words amd smile upon my page.....so many around me suffer each day with so much pain......I wanted them to knkw they are always in my orayers and thoughts......luv and hugs xo :)
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15th Dec 2015 2:44pm
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19th Dec 2015 3:49am
Kavik my precious friend......yes you are......I know you suffer in so many ways......I'm always so amazed by your strength in life after all you've been thru......admire you very much xo :)
Re. Whisper It All Away
15th Dec 2015 6:09pm
You're so tender and sweet Flower! Your words have healing power, and I always look forward to reading them. They're a lot better for pain than something like Percocet. Excellent work, and thank you...
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19th Dec 2015 3:55am
Awe Crow......you make me feel a worthy person......I thank you for that......you're words are so kind and I luv your words of encouragement.......I hope one day they find a cure for all my friends.....it's hard knowing all you can do for them is listen......luv and hugs xo :)
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15th Dec 2015 6:15pm
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19th Dec 2015 3:58am
Hi Wanderer......you're such a sweet tender soul......I hope my words give comfort to many souls......that they feel so not alone in their pain......thank you for yiur sweet words and smile luv and hugs xo :)
Re. Whisper It All Away
15th Dec 2015 7:29pm
Flower, such a beautiful ink.. with so much compassion for those who suffer daily.. nicely done.. with love, and respect..
Dave
Dave
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Re: Re. Whisper It All Away
19th Dec 2015 4:06am
Thank you Diamond always with sweet words......I know so many who aren't sure they will be able to walk when they wake up in the morning....constant pain....others so emotional broken they can hardly function in life.....I was there once myself just over a yesr ago.....my friends held my heart and got me thru it......appreciate yiu much.....luv and hugs xo :)
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Anonymous
15th Dec 2015 9:26pm
Ahhh . . . And there are so many in the category
you speak of, Flower. I am not so eat up with the
pain and suffering, but I do have my moments of
backlash from time to time, so, thank you for your
concern for people like me and all the rest . . .
you speak of, Flower. I am not so eat up with the
pain and suffering, but I do have my moments of
backlash from time to time, so, thank you for your
concern for people like me and all the rest . . .
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19th Dec 2015 1:06pm
Hi Scooter......I'm sorry I thought I answered this till I looked and I had no reply.......guess I didn't hit send.......maybe I need to go back to the 13th floor.......LOL!!! I know who suffer and it's not just from physical pain.......there is mental and emotional as well......they both take a toll on your body as much as the physical does......I've gone thru the emotional side and it's taken me till now to get over it......yet at times it seems as if I'm not......it takes one action to bring the tears back......thank you for the sensitive words you leave me......your friendship is precious......you're a wonderful soul......appreciate your smiles upon my pages xo :)