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Triangle
You love her, not me
But I love
You
△
You want her, and me
But I need
You
▶
You chase her, push me
But I chase
You
◀
You love her, not me
But I love
You
▼
I let you go, you pull me back
She's still
There
▲
But I love
You
△
You want her, and me
But I need
You
▶
You chase her, push me
But I chase
You
◀
You love her, not me
But I love
You
▼
I let you go, you pull me back
She's still
There
▲
Published 15th Dec 2015
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20th Dec 2015 8:12am
I love the use of the characters. It adds a visual aspect to the poem. It's a great use of the media. Well done!
I also appreciate the repetitive characteristics of the piece. It does well to portray the dynamics of the narrator's dilemma.
I also appreciate the repetitive characteristics of the piece. It does well to portray the dynamics of the narrator's dilemma.
