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Dreaming Of Your Smile
waking up next to you with souls still hugging
you looked so peaceful laying there in slumber
I just laid there and watched you breathe
knowing we are the vision behind your eyelids
can tell your dreams are peaceful
full of luv ~ happiness ~ life
luv watching that sweet smile appear as you sleep
I snuggle back next to you
placing my head upon your chest
your heartbeat tapping against my cheek
soon you're watching me smile as I drift off to dream
Copyright © 2015 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
you looked so peaceful laying there in slumber
I just laid there and watched you breathe
knowing we are the vision behind your eyelids
can tell your dreams are peaceful
full of luv ~ happiness ~ life
luv watching that sweet smile appear as you sleep
I snuggle back next to you
placing my head upon your chest
your heartbeat tapping against my cheek
soon you're watching me smile as I drift off to dream
Copyright © 2015 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
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Re. Dreaming Of Your Smile
12th Dec 2015 2:46am
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13th Dec 2015 3:39am
Re. Dreaming Of Your Smile
12th Dec 2015 3:13am
Flower, this is a beautiful write.. truly amazing.. much respect..
Dave
Dave
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13th Dec 2015 3:39am
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13th Dec 2015 3:41am
Thank you Kavik my precious friend for such encouragement.....luv.....hugs and smiles your way xo :)
Re. Dreaming Of Your Smile
12th Dec 2015 5:00am
ur too good
who has the power to keep the waves at arms length
ur erotica surpasses the surfs desires
even they seem to be afraid
HAPPY XMAS FLOWERY
ur poetry is still extraordinary
mine still crude
as guys love gals in the nude
i love to be read
as I stand
else tis better to be dead
for again
MERRY XMAS again!!!!!!
who has the power to keep the waves at arms length
ur erotica surpasses the surfs desires
even they seem to be afraid
HAPPY XMAS FLOWERY
ur poetry is still extraordinary
mine still crude
as guys love gals in the nude
i love to be read
as I stand
else tis better to be dead
for again
MERRY XMAS again!!!!!!
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Re: Re. Dreaming Of Your Smile
13th Dec 2015 3:46am
Merry Christmas Again!! It's always nice to see you upon my page......hope this finds you well......thank you for your great thoughts and words.......will visit you soon xo :)
Re: Re. Dreaming Of Your Smile
15th Dec 2015 4:34am
merrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
xxxxxxxxxmmmmmmmmmmmaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssssssssssssss
flowerieeeeeeeeeeeeeee
againlyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
xxxxxxxxxmmmmmmmmmmmaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssssssssssssss
flowerieeeeeeeeeeeeeee
againlyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
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19th Dec 2015 4:18am
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12th Dec 2015 6:06am
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12th Dec 2015 6:08am
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13th Dec 2015 3:49am
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12th Dec 2015 7:06pm
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13th Dec 2015 3:52am
Hi Solomon......I luv dreams.....cause desires come true in them......thank you xo :)
Re. Dreaming Of Your Smile
12th Dec 2015 9:34pm
Ahhh, flowergirl, luv ~ :-*
This is a quietly magnificent piece. All that you've written here is sheer perfection from
with souls still hugging
to
your heartbeat tapping against my cheek
Lord, woman! This is superb, so beautifully crafted from the soul. :-*
This is a quietly magnificent piece. All that you've written here is sheer perfection from
with souls still hugging
to
your heartbeat tapping against my cheek
Lord, woman! This is superb, so beautifully crafted from the soul. :-*
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Re: Re. Dreaming Of Your Smile
13th Dec 2015 3:54am
Awe Savaja......how blessed I am to have you smile upon my page......thank you for the wonderful words and thoughts you've left me......appreciate you much......you've brought me a much needed smile to my heart......xo :)