Picture Perfect

Should not second line read punctuated: "Your bare ass, on all fours" (added comma)?

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Mind and body
filled with verbs.. [ie 'doing' words]
Those of wants and
dirty words....

Thank you sir for pointing out the punctuation error. I appreciate  you taking the time to read and comment.

Keith

Very arousing and provocative way to write about sexting.
It makes it sound very appealing too in the process.
Keep up the good work Keith :)

Thank you Ms Jackson, for stopping
by and commenting. I appreciate the kind words and your take on this write. I am sorry that I have been missing in action and not keeping up with my reading. I hope to get back on track soon.

Thank you
much
Keith

Ahhh, knot2much, luv ~ :-*

Once upon a time, I believe you told me my poetry was highly evocative, that I brought one into it. I now must confirm you do very much the same, luv. :-*

Your poems are quite something. You immerse one and you are adroit - oh so skillful, luv.

You begin: the immersion in sensuality, pure eroticism, lush delectability of form and you present a vision of gorgeous abandon. We are dripping want and tender regard in a land redolent with the scents of lust and then love, subtly strengthened. Oh, so deft a hand have you!

And, then, at the last, the final depth - we're in too deep to withdraw now, committed and delirious with desire, the heady tenderness displayed, so when the aching poignance at the last, the heart-wrenching realization of the inevitability of relinquishment of even those glorious mental pictures is upon us, tis ineffably sad...

You write it all so piercingly well, luv. :-*

Thank you love,
    I am so glad that you remembered
my comment on your writing. You can be assured that your comment will be
long remembered. I am so glad that you enjoyed the write and I am overwhelmed by the your more than
kind words.

Thank you
So much

Keith

Dearest Taryn,  
you are much too
kind and sweet to me. I am glad that
enjoyed and appreciated  the bread crumbs of love left along the way.
As always I am honored each time you leave your touch on my page.

Much luvs
Keith