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Needles Pins and that Camel

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Left my baggage; knitting pins and tonic
water on the carriage made for too many;
My head finally breaking the noose; This
loop of knot, running rings and cheshire
grins that broke the camel along with the
baggage on the floor before turning back
in wistful glance and little girl stance.
Written by Lookawaynow (Rose)
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