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Poe such a beautifully written poignant poem..

touching my heart..

love Crim

My Crim, Thank you for your sweet comment as always I appreciate it much. :)

"Signs of sufferage...
broken bones scattered
about the ribbed graveyard,
'mongst the decay of
forgotten hopes n' dreams
imprisoned by yesteryear's
tears..."

Man, what great imagery. I really liked the scne. You painted here as well as the questioned posed. Nice write.

Hey, I'm pleased you liked the piece
I spilled n it's imagery... Truly thank u
n I will return the consideration soon :)

Aaawww thank you, especially for the hugs, they're never appreciated more
for I love as many as I can get lol... Appreciate your thoughts n support as well always :)

This was Amazing second stanza resonates like a heartbeat..love this also The blood-evidence
of a massacred soul," wonderfully crafted ink Poetik!!!

Sweetest Desire you make me smile widely...thank you so much for always showing your support. Truly appreciate you :)

Ahhh, Erotic Ninja, luv ~ :-*

I came and read this when first you posted it and could not comment for I was shuttered round about with pain.  

You tear at the heart, luv, with your words of forlorn, stultifying loneliness.

I have been in this place and my being aches with its remembrance. You are unbelievably adroit at illuminating these commonalities of the human experience. If you wrote plays, there'd be not a dry eye in the house, luv. :-*

Well if ur trying to make ME tear up, it's working lady! lol... Seriously, love your thought filled visits n your continued support is everything so thank u sooooooo much S! :)

i have to agree with my sensual oracle savaja on this one. had to step away, have a cuppa tea & let your words steep with my rosehip & hibiscus brew...
... ga'damnit poe this is just... just... oh *sigh* too much deep thinking that must needs be pondered with appropriate gravity
*
to say this was beautifully written is a gross understatement of its heart [&] soul, papi, truly. there's so many heartbreak poems out there that can't hold a candle to what you've accomplished here ...
"The blood-evidence
of a massacred soul,
shredded n' desecrated
from it's whole..."
^^^^^^^^
you ever see deep tissue bruising [?] makes me think of that... of flesh revealing the pulp of hurt beneath it
... tiny gods, i'm gonna stop m'self here or i'll be at this gushing all day :)
leaving heartshards & gratitude to you for one of the best reads i've had in months
merci & mercy
xo

Aaaawwww... My loving, sweet Shadoe you cast a beautiful shadow
over my thoughts... I'm grateful beyond words for your support n the list add!! :)

This def touched an emotional cord for me..beautiful words and imagery throughout...as always your expressions do. It dissapoint....nice write

My Lyrical One you are a doll
n I'm lucky to have your support
for my ink, grateful as always I deeply appreciate you :)

you put this under 'love poem ' but damn this carries  
such a dark vibe..  
too many to quote..
i can see why you don't often indulge in the genre [dark poetry]..  
an abyss it can become..  
unspoken depth you possess my brotha...  
your artistry undeniable..  
 
much respect!

You HIT the nail on the head bro. That is exactly why I don't stay in that genre... Truly humbled again by your thoughts support. Much peace n love to you n yours bro. :)

Oh, Poe, that is a magical, lyrical, special poem.
My favourite stanza, though all stanzas are my favourite. So touching ...

Signs of sufferage...
broken bones scattered
about the ribbed graveyard,
'mongst the decay of
forgotten hopes n' dreams
imprisoned by yesteryear's
tears...

Reading list. Absolutely. xoxo

My sweet sweet Chi... C'mere n let me kiss ur sweetness into me :)

wonder...
In vast amounts of space,
when bein' so cramped inside
the tiny space 'tween walls
if there's any visible bruisin'
on the heart...

Certainly the definition of how one feels with a lack of true intimacy.

Hey lady, happy to see you here on my page again...
Thank u, appreciate it bunches :)

to fill a void so vast and wide as to hold the universe and watch it collide....this is truly a special poem....would love to write it over a pic of edgar and hang it on my wall

Wow... Deeply flattered dude, truly
appreciate the praise and the add to your list. :) happy to know this piece has moved you in such a way :)

Well this makes me go into my deep thinking process. So much you take in. I agree with moe I loved the signs of suffrage part. Great write 👌

"Deep thinkin" huh?
Why grandma what big brains u have...
N "grandma, what deep thoughts u drink" lol...  Thank you my sweetheart
I greatly appreciate your support always :)

Lol you are ridiculous

:( sorry :(

Feels like goose bumps take over after reading the end . This is so good. An interesting way to think.....=) like like it!

T8M! Wow, I've missed ur shine on my page :) thank u, truly appreciate the RL add n ur support :)