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There's something Poetic 'bout Jet Exhausts...'
Tracin' the outlines of mind,
like cotton-fabricated...
clouded images,
run horizontal tracks thru space...
I can see the majesty invoked
as the exhaust of light-sped,
momentarily...
froze time in abandoned
'smoke trails' via the blue
chase beyond...
as they 'drag' along its roads
silence erupts durin' this
mystical, imaginary place,
The 'Windy Skyway 500' race...
Published 6th Dec 2015
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Anonymous
6th Dec 2015 11:10am
I can't help thinking "chemtrails" , but that's just me... ;)
a lovely piece, my friend :) thanks for the read.
I wish I'd thought up stanza 4 for a drugs poem ;)
a lovely piece, my friend :) thanks for the read.
I wish I'd thought up stanza 4 for a drugs poem ;)
6th Dec 2015 11:40am
Chem trails sounds great too!
N yea after the initial writing
I did think, hhmmmm sounds like
"Someone" may have been on some kinda 'trip' huh? lol... Thank u my sweet dear friend for ur insight n support :)
N yea after the initial writing
I did think, hhmmmm sounds like
"Someone" may have been on some kinda 'trip' huh? lol... Thank u my sweet dear friend for ur insight n support :)
6th Dec 2015 1:10pm
well if there wasn't anything poetic before, there sure as fondant is now ltm
wonderfully trippy write, Poe
xo
wonderfully trippy write, Poe
xo
6th Dec 2015 1:18pm
Aaaawwww well that was a day maker for me! thank you my dear Katja, for your unwavering support always :)
6th Dec 2015 2:08pm
6th Dec 2015 2:55pm
My sweetness, hi there! been awhile but happy to hear from you again. :) thank u so much sweetie! :)
6th Dec 2015 4:53pm
7th Dec 2015 1:09am
PROOF we are bros. We think the same way about inspiration... lol
N yea, I thank you my brother always n forever for your unrelenting support of my ink... :)
N yea, I thank you my brother always n forever for your unrelenting support of my ink... :)
6th Dec 2015 11:39pm
I feel busted..jet planes are my favorite sound and it goes right thru me..love it. Reading this left me with a smile..so huge thank you ..curtsy bow :)
7th Dec 2015 1:11am
Thank you my sweetheart for your continued support n I'm so happy I gave you a subject you love n a smile...
I feel honored to have done so! :)
I feel honored to have done so! :)
7th Dec 2015 00:13am
Helluva Scribe Poetik...lingers like contrails on cool autumn day...I like how this poem gives just enough to let the poetry take the reader wherever their mind roams.. Can be taken in many contex..even erotic (or maybe thats just my mind roaming lol) anyrate trippy ink indeed..loved it
7th Dec 2015 1:13am
Hey if it gave you erotic thoughts, I'm NOT gonna tell u different lol... I'm glad ur mind deviated in the smut a lil lol... Oh n I thank u so much my sweetness :)
7th Dec 2015 5:40am
Yes great imagery I love this ..such a light fun piece...I love looking at the sky as planes fly to see what objects their streaks create...lovely write
7th Dec 2015 11:40pm
I'm happy you enjoyed n I thank u as well, it's an honor to
have your support :)
have your support :)
7th Dec 2015 10:57pm
A new poet of mine inbox me today asking for a list of great poets to follower and your name was on the list.
Ink like this is why you are so worthy to be poetically praised.... xo
Ink like this is why you are so worthy to be poetically praised.... xo
7th Dec 2015 11:45pm
Really? Wow I'm super flattered you had me as one in ur list of recommends! :) ur the gets my beauty :) n thanks a ton for all ur support always :)
21st Jan 2016 3:55am
This is really sweet. I've been reminding myself lately to look up more. :)
21st Jan 2016 8:50am
Hey! So very nice of you to visit in' me... Thanks, n yea there's a good bit of magic UP there! :) appreciate ur time n thoughts :)
