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For Warmhearted Holiday Haikus Comp
1. Winter Wonderland
Broad Christmas smiling
Warm enough to roast chestnuts
Pointless open fire
2. What I Really Want
Perfect Christmas gifts
The gift of human true love
The gift of world peace
3. Shnow Business
Much fun in the snow
Snow men, snow women, snow balls
Pretend icy fights
4. Xmas Letter
I've been so good
Going to get what's on my list
Hope he remembers
5. Get To Sleep Quick
Shhh! I hear jingle bells
Better get to sleep right now
Santa please stop here
6. All I Want
You are all I want
To hold me tight this Christmas
Please, please, please be there
Broad Christmas smiling
Warm enough to roast chestnuts
Pointless open fire
2. What I Really Want
Perfect Christmas gifts
The gift of human true love
The gift of world peace
3. Shnow Business
Much fun in the snow
Snow men, snow women, snow balls
Pretend icy fights
4. Xmas Letter
I've been so good
Going to get what's on my list
Hope he remembers
5. Get To Sleep Quick
Shhh! I hear jingle bells
Better get to sleep right now
Santa please stop here
6. All I Want
You are all I want
To hold me tight this Christmas
Please, please, please be there
Published 1st Dec 2015
| Edited 4th Dec 2015
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1st Dec 2015 11:51pm
a nice selection box
of poems - can I have
have one...
preferably with a
soft centre..:)
of poems - can I have
have one...
preferably with a
soft centre..:)
2nd Dec 2015 2:16am
2nd Dec 2015 2:42pm
I love the creativity in which you chose to express youself...this sounds like an amazing christmas indeed. Hope you get the loving squeezes you want and need !! Nice write
2nd Dec 2015 8:24pm
"Much fun in the snow
Snow men, snow women, snow balls
Pretend icy fights " I dig it.
Snow men, snow women, snow balls
Pretend icy fights " I dig it.
3rd Dec 2015 10:47pm
Enjoyed these but have to admit I like the cold hearted ones better...must be the grinch in me...lol.. ;)
Last haiku, first line...change 'you're' to 'you are' to get the line right, i.e. 5
Last haiku, first line...change 'you're' to 'you are' to get the line right, i.e. 5
4th Dec 2015 10:32pm
glad you enjoyed these as well, thanks for the heads up I fixed that last one :-)
