Content Warning : Do you want to continue?
This poem contains content which some readers may find disturbing.
It is unsuitable for children or anyone who is easily offended.
YES
I am over 18 years old, I have been warned and I still want to read this poem.
I am over 18 years old, I have been warned and I still want to read this poem.
NO
I don't want to read this type of content, take me back to the previous page.
I don't want to read this type of content, take me back to the previous page.
deepundergroundpoetry.com
....sometimes, I like it Rough
*….sometimes I like it rough, less classy
on those days when hoarse and raw resembles my mood*
Snug fit leads to confined hips,
caressed and licked quivering clit.
Clenched.
Messy cheeks, surges released with every moaned need
forced tactically on my knees
feenin’ to taste, begging to slurp
mesmerized by his glistening head dripping smiles
(I’m craving to suck)
Shaft stiffened within lungs,
the firmer he grips my head, the deeper he travels
towards the back of my throat, making me….
......wetter
Thrusting in my mouth while sharing fornicated lines
“Choke on it!”
…and I do, like a whore, gagging for more
wanting to lick balls and taint, I’m no saint,
but his g-spot is the spot my tongue wants to paint
*....sometimes, I like it rough, a little trashy
on those day when spontaneous fucking becomes a
tamed tabooed climax*
Flipped and folded in strategized position
where both sets of my lips are simultaneously being
worked over, between 6 to 9 minutes
*Did you catch that?*
I’m ready to get penetrated and spanked.
Legs flanked, against frail and clammy thighs
yoni sighs pleasure each time his tip slowly enters,
restriction and friction upon every re-entry
Pull and push until seeds are coaxed out by
constricted wet-walls.
Residue from sweet butter-nut love juice decorates my lips
oozing sluggishly with each squeeze of cock
‘I won’t waste a drop’
*….sometimes, I like it rough…..
just because…*
Rain~
Published 30th Nov 2015
| Edited 1st Apr 2016
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 17
reading list entries 3
comments 40
reads 2134
Commenting Preference:
The author has chosen not to accept new comments at this time.
30th Nov 2015 5:34am
lol... Stamp of approval from you Naajir, means I've done well! ;) Thanks luv, appreciate you keeping her rough self...
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Sep 2020 3:45am
30th Nov 2015 5:46am
<< post removed >>
30th Nov 2015 6:04am
Lady T! So pleased to hear you're somewhat tingly and creamy! ;) Pretty sweet reward when the men are erect and the ladies are wet, from Raindrops. ;)
30th Nov 2015 7:15am
trashy music plays to this kind of dirty sex.
easy to visualize the choreography...
easy to visualize the choreography...
30th Nov 2015 4:27pm
hey John, drop me a list of trashy music hun. I can use a good-sexy-slutty beat, when in a slutty mood.
Wonderful comment....Thankya!
Wonderful comment....Thankya!
Anonymous
- Edited 8th Nov 2018 00:49am
30th Nov 2015 7:53am
<< post removed >>
30th Nov 2015 4:33pm
but......but......but, that's the meat of this ink. lol.... Not sure how the title's energy overpowers the crust of the ink but hey, it's a nice observation and critique. I'll let it marinate for a while..... Thanks luv, appreciate it....
Anonymous
- Edited 8th Nov 2018 00:49am
2nd Dec 2015 8:11am
<< post removed >>
30th Nov 2015 10:44am
Oooohhh my goodness!! Mmmmm u do huh!? Well I'd love to 'rough you up' anytime lady lol whew... I feel like this ink roughed me up a bit, becuz I'm riled UP lol...
30th Nov 2015 4:35pm
You're always riled up and wanting to rough somebody up Rich! ;) Such a hoot!
Thanks Poe! Appreciate you....
Thanks Poe! Appreciate you....
30th Nov 2015 10:45am
Wow lady T this is a big departure from your normally subtle eroticism and no worse for it either! When it comes to sex poems a change is as good as a change in the real thing now and then. What next a bit of anal analysis? Just kidding
Luv atcha ;-)
Luv atcha ;-)
30th Nov 2015 4:40pm
Tony, you are so correct! My erotica is very soft and clean, and it's what I love to write and read, but all good girls have a bad girl side, and this is the ink that showcase a shadow of my 'freaky side'. Some sexual secrets are best left in the bedroom. This is just a drop of the dirty in me. ;)
Well it made me hard! Anymore to add to that?
yoni sighs pleasure each time his tip slowly enters
yoni sighs pleasure each time his tip slowly enters
30th Nov 2015 4:44pm
'Hard' was my mission, so glad to hear I accomplished it IvarHakuse. ;)
Thank you kind sir, for the 'rigid' reply......
Thank you kind sir, for the 'rigid' reply......
30th Nov 2015 11:38am
had to revisit to express more articulate thoughts.
because this poem demands it
.
Rain..what i appreciate about this piece of art is that it nudges
..or rather knock us off pristine pedestals of what some think
poetry should be..poetry [art] is the conveyance of the human
experience and it has a wide rage of expression.AND YES!!
sometimes we need to undress the words strip away the
metaphors and do away with emotional attachments to cater
to our carnivorous selves ..art reflects our moods just as it
reflects every other aspect of us..push that pen til it squirts
dammit..we know what the judges do behind closed doors*
because this poem demands it
.
Rain..what i appreciate about this piece of art is that it nudges
..or rather knock us off pristine pedestals of what some think
poetry should be..poetry [art] is the conveyance of the human
experience and it has a wide rage of expression.AND YES!!
sometimes we need to undress the words strip away the
metaphors and do away with emotional attachments to cater
to our carnivorous selves ..art reflects our moods just as it
reflects every other aspect of us..push that pen til it squirts
dammit..we know what the judges do behind closed doors*
30th Nov 2015 4:50pm
"AND YES!!
sometimes we need to undress the words strip away the
metaphors and do away with emotional attachments to cater
to our carnivorous selves" <--Wow Naajir! This pretty much sums up my attitude towards writing this piece.
I had to expose myself in order to ink this. My pen had to become nude....
So very pleased that you enjoyed this! You know how much I respect and value your opinion. Thanks luv!
sometimes we need to undress the words strip away the
metaphors and do away with emotional attachments to cater
to our carnivorous selves" <--Wow Naajir! This pretty much sums up my attitude towards writing this piece.
I had to expose myself in order to ink this. My pen had to become nude....
So very pleased that you enjoyed this! You know how much I respect and value your opinion. Thanks luv!
30th Nov 2015 12:03pm
🤗 " Just RAINN on Me" *swv voice..
Omg, This is such a sexy soul felt piece . It's so vivid and eludes that raw truth. You have turned me all shades of red and as always I'm in AWE❤️ Thank you for giving me these priceless poetic gifts !!
Omg, This is such a sexy soul felt piece . It's so vivid and eludes that raw truth. You have turned me all shades of red and as always I'm in AWE❤️ Thank you for giving me these priceless poetic gifts !!
30th Nov 2015 4:54pm
Your comments are just a joy to read vividm! :) I always feel a respectable surge when I see you around bringing ink love my way. Love when I make you blush too! A Poet's goal! Crushing on your replies! :)
Thank you for keeping her. #Hugs
Thank you for keeping her. #Hugs
30th Nov 2015 9:49pm
This is raw, rough but beautifully written Rain. And such precision!
"Flipped and folded in strategized position
where both sets of my lips are simultaneously being
worked over, between 6 to 9 minutes"
I'm just glad you come with instructions. Fine work Rain, but I fear that I would need at least ten minutes....
"Flipped and folded in strategized position
where both sets of my lips are simultaneously being
worked over, between 6 to 9 minutes"
I'm just glad you come with instructions. Fine work Rain, but I fear that I would need at least ten minutes....
2nd Dec 2015 9:59pm
lol....even my instructions are complicated when a complicated mind tries to understand me.
I'm actually simplicity in bloom. ;) Thank you for the wonderful comment Crow! I really do appreciateya'....
I'm actually simplicity in bloom. ;) Thank you for the wonderful comment Crow! I really do appreciateya'....
1st Dec 2015 2:54am
Oh how you have captured the savage expression of the power of sexual deep hunger that has to escape. We all have a very deep primal instincts and the ones that can tap this energy find its release quite invigorating. I am a true fan of your finer designed writing but this will also keep my attention. The pic is.... Well... Divine
2nd Dec 2015 10:01pm
....hey handsome, thank you for the wonderful comment. As usual, your words are lyrical to me.
So pleased you noticed the fine and refined texture of my ink, G! Xo
So pleased you noticed the fine and refined texture of my ink, G! Xo
2nd Dec 2015 1:06pm
oooooooh that pic *fanning m'self* laaaaaawd have mercy
*
rain, rain, rain, we need a different extreme content warning for you [like a slippery when wet sign ltm]
i feckin loved this!!! don't even know where to begin choosing favorite lines. hells freakin bells, lady
yea okay...
"Thrusting in my mouth while sharing fornicated lines
“Choke on it!”
…and I do, like a whore, gagging for more
wanting to lick balls and taint, I’m no saint,"
^^^^^^^
because dirty, sloppy, messy blowjoys are just the best breakfast
loveeeeeeeeeeeed this so damn much i'm gonna go evict someone from my list lol
xoxoxox
*
rain, rain, rain, we need a different extreme content warning for you [like a slippery when wet sign ltm]
i feckin loved this!!! don't even know where to begin choosing favorite lines. hells freakin bells, lady
yea okay...
"Thrusting in my mouth while sharing fornicated lines
“Choke on it!”
…and I do, like a whore, gagging for more
wanting to lick balls and taint, I’m no saint,"
^^^^^^^
because dirty, sloppy, messy blowjoys are just the best breakfast
loveeeeeeeeeeeed this so damn much i'm gonna go evict someone from my list lol
xoxoxox
2nd Dec 2015 10:09pm
Nooooo! What pic is HAWT, is your avatar! Omg, you are just so damn photogenic dancedoll! Beautiful pic!
Thanks lovely one for the amazing commentary. I always look forward to your two cents- changed into a million dollars worth of poetic love.
Now, ask me why I had a feelin' you would love that part of this ink?! lmao...
We dainty, exquisite sluts know what moves us. ;) Thanks for the ink love and keeping' her!
Thanks lovely one for the amazing commentary. I always look forward to your two cents- changed into a million dollars worth of poetic love.
Now, ask me why I had a feelin' you would love that part of this ink?! lmao...
We dainty, exquisite sluts know what moves us. ;) Thanks for the ink love and keeping' her!
4th Dec 2015 6:53pm
5th Dec 2015 6:02pm
11th Dec 2015 00:43am
Mind blowing and extremely intense. I think I need a spanking just for reading this...
JJ
JJ
14th Dec 2015 1:14am
14th Dec 2015 7:42pm
14th Dec 2015 5:02am
Rain1courtel, luv ~ :-*
My. My. My. My. My.
You are quite extravagantly delicious here with your temptingly primal self. But, then, you are always rather breathtaking, luv, aren't you? (Purely a rhetorical query, dearling; don't bother answering: truth is truth, after all. ;-*)
I want to comment on the consummate skill you show artistically in this gorgeously explicit piece, but to tell another truth, I'm having trouble formulating those sorts of thoughts. My mind is rather occupied with the inferno you've begun in other places... ;-*
My. My. My. My. My.
You are quite extravagantly delicious here with your temptingly primal self. But, then, you are always rather breathtaking, luv, aren't you? (Purely a rhetorical query, dearling; don't bother answering: truth is truth, after all. ;-*)
I want to comment on the consummate skill you show artistically in this gorgeously explicit piece, but to tell another truth, I'm having trouble formulating those sorts of thoughts. My mind is rather occupied with the inferno you've begun in other places... ;-*
14th Dec 2015 5:34am
Love...Love.....love your comment Savaja! :) Means a lot coming from a poet as gifted as you.
Thank you so very much!
Thank you so very much!
14th Dec 2015 6:50am
I must admit to being rather deeply enamored of your response.
You've quite made my night, luv.
Thank you very much, indeed! :-* :-* :-*
You've quite made my night, luv.
Thank you very much, indeed! :-* :-* :-*
14th Dec 2015 5:08pm
7th Jan 2016 4:08am
All I can really say is this is the type of write that will produce much inspiration and for some of us, it will be with the pen!
8th Jan 2016 00:46am
Oh really? :) I would love to read any inspiration you might have received from this ink, if any!
Thanks for reading my rough side Ted......
Thanks for reading my rough side Ted......
7th Jan 2016 8:31am
8th Jan 2016 00:49am
Oh my sista-girl, well go head on and tingle inside little hot mama! Tingle on..... :)
Thanks Levesta!
Thanks Levesta!
28th Jan 2016 2:16am
Rain this is outstanding! This smolders with eroticism. You've penned a truly sensual poem where bondage becomes the ultimate elixir of sexual power. I was enthralled by your descriptions. Brilliantly sensual.
John
John
28th Jan 2016 5:03am
Oh my! Your comment was spectacular John! You've got me smiling in the quiet of the night. I appreciate you touring my speckled wall of ink. :) I do hope to stop by your place soon and give it a gander. Once again, so thrilled you decided to keep her for a little while....
