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MOOOOOOOOOOOOO
I'm like a milk carton in the fridge
I look enticing from afar
but once you grab it
and have a chance to feel it
you realize,
it's utterly empty.
I look enticing from afar
but once you grab it
and have a chance to feel it
you realize,
it's utterly empty.
Published 26th Nov 2015
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26th Nov 2015 7:34pm
Anonymous
26th Nov 2015 9:37pm
Yep, I agree with Dan X, Nikki is an amazing writer and there is much to her....
26th Nov 2015 11:27pm
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27th Nov 2015 00:27am
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27th Nov 2015 00:39am
27th Nov 2015 11:02pm
29th Nov 2015 1:47am
I thought you might use the word "udderly" instead of utterly...now that would have been funny as hell....:)
But seriously....... I don't need to feel you up close....to know that you "feel" just fine to me...I have known that for quite awhile about you my dear...
But seriously....... I don't need to feel you up close....to know that you "feel" just fine to me...I have known that for quite awhile about you my dear...
29th Nov 2015 9:09pm
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18th Dec 2015 9:37pm
Nikki, you have moooooooooooocho value. You are filled with sweet, creamy poetry.
