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ST,Paul ? No, there was none at all
it not the scene
but how you act it.
you slaughter a whole family in front of me
and i could laugh at it
like i said its how you act it .
when i was 15 i watched a kid jump
off of a bridge 500 feet up
the part that got me wasnt the death
but some evil soul
said hey faggot jump
your causing traffic
the kid did what he said
and he jump off the ledge
and to this day
it bothers my head
before i was 16 i had seen two men die
and at least 3 dead bodies
in different stages of decomposing
and this is like, majority of my writes above and below are both true storys.
one on the way home from high school
with the homie matt by my side
we turned the a left on s dale st
walked about 2/3 down the street
and to are surprise
there stood a man
sobbing,and shakeing violently
terriffed he begged for his life ,
i couldnt under stand what was happening
i was laughing
i couldn't see anyone else
i said hey look at this crack head
but that wasn't the case
as we came around the side
of a white ford pick up
an American flag sticker
post on its back
the nickel plated, NOT chrome
45 caliber pistol went off
one shot.
i almost fucking fell off my feet
the homie said later
that the shooter looked right at us
before he turn and pulled the trigger
i dont remember now,
or then
i told him all i seen was the gun
and heard the sound that it made
its true when show you
how a jugular bleeds in the movies
blood shot out of his neck about 6 feet
he held it tight, i watched him try
the blood gushed and pulsed thu his fingers
despite how he tried ,
he stumbled about 6 to 9 feet
to his car before he hit the ground
and in massive puddle of blood
thats where choked and drowned,
fuck its getting harder and harder to write about events like this in my life .
i think im gonna take a little break d.u peeps
ill keep posting stuff,but the biograpgy shits gotta chill a bit ,sorry seriouly to much to fast im fuckin losing it right now. fucking shit
but how you act it.
you slaughter a whole family in front of me
and i could laugh at it
like i said its how you act it .
when i was 15 i watched a kid jump
off of a bridge 500 feet up
the part that got me wasnt the death
but some evil soul
said hey faggot jump
your causing traffic
the kid did what he said
and he jump off the ledge
and to this day
it bothers my head
before i was 16 i had seen two men die
and at least 3 dead bodies
in different stages of decomposing
and this is like, majority of my writes above and below are both true storys.
one on the way home from high school
with the homie matt by my side
we turned the a left on s dale st
walked about 2/3 down the street
and to are surprise
there stood a man
sobbing,and shakeing violently
terriffed he begged for his life ,
i couldnt under stand what was happening
i was laughing
i couldn't see anyone else
i said hey look at this crack head
but that wasn't the case
as we came around the side
of a white ford pick up
an American flag sticker
post on its back
the nickel plated, NOT chrome
45 caliber pistol went off
one shot.
i almost fucking fell off my feet
the homie said later
that the shooter looked right at us
before he turn and pulled the trigger
i dont remember now,
or then
i told him all i seen was the gun
and heard the sound that it made
its true when show you
how a jugular bleeds in the movies
blood shot out of his neck about 6 feet
he held it tight, i watched him try
the blood gushed and pulsed thu his fingers
despite how he tried ,
he stumbled about 6 to 9 feet
to his car before he hit the ground
and in massive puddle of blood
thats where choked and drowned,
fuck its getting harder and harder to write about events like this in my life .
i think im gonna take a little break d.u peeps
ill keep posting stuff,but the biograpgy shits gotta chill a bit ,sorry seriouly to much to fast im fuckin losing it right now. fucking shit
Published 24th Nov 2015
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24th Nov 2015 2:04am
the stuff that hits home is the best work all heart but sometimes hard to relive as you write.
24th Nov 2015 3:41am
yes its true what your saying, trust me it's hard for me to say ,write , or even think about , so i understand that 90$ of people think this is horrific , and disgusting and just bad taste , but its the truth plain and actually simple .. i don't even use words to exaggerate the content, basics like gun shot , blood dripped , i could easily make this more visual , but choose not to because of the fact i know its hard already to get thru, like i said in a previous write when I've told people men or women a part of my life like they grab they face in shock, cry and hold my hands apologizing like it helps or something.. it means nothing to me , what does is when some understands how much it had to of affected me , and knows certain things you just don't do or say around me because i will and without remorse survive and if you have earned you place in my life , to a T i will do what ever you want in precise detail which people have made the mistake of thinking I thought they were joking or exaggerating what they ask me do .then turn around treat me like im crazy or fucked up because i did exactlly what they ask of me , this has also been exploited by peolple to pussy to handle there own shit ,
28th Nov 2015 4:15am
I'm new to writing poetry, and sometimes it physically & emotionally drains me also! You have insight to your work that makes me feel, deeply & emotionally provoked! The only way I like poetry! I think you'll fit in well here! A fan, SURVIVOR➰
28th Nov 2015 9:39am
thank you!!! its an honor your poetry does the same for me its gripping and highly visual and puts me right there, right were i should be inside the poem
