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Message in a bottle
On our coast
of shallow waters
is a bottle
that has been found
laying within
the massage
are meanings
that will break you down
do you dare
to take a look
opon this thin skin
of what you thought
of shallow waters
is a bottle
that has been found
laying within
the massage
are meanings
that will break you down
do you dare
to take a look
opon this thin skin
of what you thought
Published 23rd Nov 2015
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24th Nov 2015 9:00am
Nice pen, always dreamed of finding a message in a bottle. Did you mean to write opon, or upon? Typos invite the errorists....
25th Nov 2015 4:01pm
24th Nov 2015 3:12pm
A few typ-os throughout causes the flow to chatter. An interesting message none the less. Keep Grindin. CAOS737
25th Nov 2015 4:02pm
