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Gravity
I can't keep up with gravity.
I'm watching it fall
from eyelid to bless me;
from murder to call -
to freedom from standing
with both feet in life.
I'm somewhere in there
but for knowing his eyes.
~
Age when written: 16
I'm watching it fall
from eyelid to bless me;
from murder to call -
to freedom from standing
with both feet in life.
I'm somewhere in there
but for knowing his eyes.
~
Age when written: 16
Published 21st Nov 2015
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10th Oct 2020 2:27am
I'm not sure what it is, but this has a rhythm I quite enjoy, and the careless rhymes are also very nice
