Commenting Preference:
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21st Nov 2015 12:34pm
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21st Nov 2015 4:58pm
Thank you, this literally just crept in, I guess hangovers serve a purpose
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21st Nov 2015 6:26pm
Love the double entendre of 'mourning' and the inference of the sun 'mute' from warmth.
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22nd Nov 2015 12:09pm
I loved playing with the words in this ... This was made part of a series, and the piece I enjoyed most therein ... Thank you for commenting on it
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21st Nov 2015 11:09pm
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22nd Nov 2015 12:10pm
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21st Nov 2015 11:58pm
Many scenarios running through my head with this one...that's what I love about haiku and poetry in general... :)
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22nd Nov 2015 12:14pm
I was trying to set up a few different dynamics with the word play: lashes/beaten ... mourning ... sun/son, to give it different dimensions ...
So yeah, let them run lol
So yeah, let them run lol
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25th Nov 2015 9:03am
..How phenomenal..
must read of you,
wow, the impact
of this .. the power
of..
shares with me the
shiverings
of the muted sun..
-Howlings
must read of you,
wow, the impact
of this .. the power
of..
shares with me the
shiverings
of the muted sun..
-Howlings
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25th Nov 2015 9:55am
Thank you, I'm humbled that you connected with the depths of this piece
Salud
Salud