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To "My Love Song" 💌
“....I don't care where I go when I'm with you
When I cry you don't laugh cause you know me
I'm in you
You're in me
I'm in you
You're in me
'cause you gave me the love, the love that I never had “
Love songs
how I wish that I
could
live,
love
and lose myself
in your tender melodies
shadow my heart so that
nothing ever again could hurt me
…..move my lifeless soul, dear love song
paint me a portrait,
“more than a feeling”
fresh aire reviving my soul
something tangible
make me feel whole.....
...again
Silly love songs,
words spoken,
shared tokens
softer than the reaped “harvest of the world” yet
“solid....as a rock”
“ You and I don't pretend, we make love
I can't feel anymore than I'm singing
I'm in you
You're in me
I'm in you
You're in me
You gave me the love, the love that I never had “
Love songs
how I wish that I
could
live,
love
and lose myself
in your tender melodies
'”....just let me live again”
( paying tribute to some of my favorite musical influences- "I'm In You", Peter Frampton, "More Than A Feeling", Tom Scholz and Boston, "Silly Love Songs", Paul McCartney, "Harvest Of The World", The Isley Brothers. "Solid As A Rock", Nick Ashford and Valerie Simpson, "Again", Janet Jackson, "Baby Be Mine", Miki Howard, "Wet Words", Tara Carter and "How Can You Mend A Broken Heart?", The Bee Gees)
Published 20th Nov 2015
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20th Nov 2015 6:24pm
20th Nov 2015 6:36pm
"paint me a portrait,
“more than a feeling”
fresh aire reviving my soul
something tangible
make me feel whole.....
...again"
Oh how I love this! Nothing is more powerful than a melody that can bring you out of a heart ache and make you believe that it's okay to try it, just one more time...
This beauty has made my day...
“more than a feeling”
fresh aire reviving my soul
something tangible
make me feel whole.....
...again"
Oh how I love this! Nothing is more powerful than a melody that can bring you out of a heart ache and make you believe that it's okay to try it, just one more time...
This beauty has made my day...
20th Nov 2015 7:08pm
20th Nov 2015 7:00pm
Archie this is really lovely. And i dig your choices..If only love were a love song..only right in the beginning, lol or waaay after looking back. Love seeing your pieces up er day Darlin. Out and doing well!
Love always
Jennifer
Love always
Jennifer
20th Nov 2015 7:09pm
20th Nov 2015 8:17pm
20th Nov 2015 9:03pm
The musician in you at it again, composing beautiful ballads. I literally spit my afternoon coffee out, reading your musical references.
"Love songs
how I wish that I
could
live,
love
and lose myself
in your tender melodies
shadow my heart so that
nothing ever again could hurt me"
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^^^^^^endearing.....
"Love songs
how I wish that I
could
live,
love
and lose myself
in your tender melodies
shadow my heart so that
nothing ever again could hurt me"
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
^^^^^^endearing.....
29th Jan 2018 6:12am
Like the mix of love song lyrics you have mixed into the poem. First one has a rather erotic ring, if one imagines the woman in the central picture sitting on top and 'taking you in'.
