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Thandi Get Down
Solitary evenings
camouflaged
mutually
in the affection of
Frankie's trunk
Mystical kinship, awaits
prying killers
in dense thick broom-grass
Blond locks water falling
over shoulders
covering the
357 Magnum
resting in home position
like an everlasting
limb
Grasping
fractured life
close to the heart
inked; to her left shoulder
like the dog tags
left behind
The beautiful sentient
guardian
kisses Lions
subdues human life
protects her Elephants
and model poses
love letters
with Leopards
Staring into
depths of
solitude
sunsets
Sipping
cocoa
strumming
campfire
blues
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Notes: -
Dedicated to my special friend Tanya
Picture Published with her permission and remains her personal property
"Thandi" - An African name meaning "loved one".
Special thanks for the input from Ahavati.
Published 19th Nov 2015
| Edited 23rd Nov 2015
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19th Nov 2015 12:57pm
She kisses Lions
Subdues human life
Protects her Elephants
Model poses love letters
with Leopards
Beautiful sentient guardian.
Subdues human life
Protects her Elephants
Model poses love letters
with Leopards
Beautiful sentient guardian.
20th Nov 2015 11:30am
Damn!
You know that part where the piece is in and sent all around and stuff and you see a statement that sums the subject up? And then you going so wish I had used... "Beautiful sentient guardian" in this... Beautifully summed up!
Thanks for the visit and lovely comment!
Al
You know that part where the piece is in and sent all around and stuff and you see a statement that sums the subject up? And then you going so wish I had used... "Beautiful sentient guardian" in this... Beautifully summed up!
Thanks for the visit and lovely comment!
Al
20th Nov 2015 4:41pm
23rd Nov 2015 2:39pm
23rd Nov 2015 5:43pm
19th Nov 2015 2:01pm
20th Nov 2015 11:31am
20th Nov 2015 4:39am
She sounds like a tough one
darling, especially this here:
" She kisses Lions
Subdues human life
Protects her Elephants
Model poses love letters
with Leopards
Staring into
depths of
solitude
sunsets
Sipping
cocoa
strumming
campfire
blues "
You let us see her vividly & vulnerable
being.
Absolutely love that.
-Howlings
darling, especially this here:
" She kisses Lions
Subdues human life
Protects her Elephants
Model poses love letters
with Leopards
Staring into
depths of
solitude
sunsets
Sipping
cocoa
strumming
campfire
blues "
You let us see her vividly & vulnerable
being.
Absolutely love that.
-Howlings
20th Nov 2015 11:34am
That's my fave part of the write too...
It's my fave part of the subject too...
So glad the vulnerability comes through, the mix worried me. Thanks for the affirmation Howling
Al ;)
It's my fave part of the subject too...
So glad the vulnerability comes through, the mix worried me. Thanks for the affirmation Howling
Al ;)
20th Nov 2015 5:14am
dangerous woman w/an exceptional arsenal,
benevolent to the animals.
exciting poetry...
benevolent to the animals.
exciting poetry...
20th Nov 2015 11:36am
Hey Hey John
Yes, exciting subject, just want to unwrap her,
might do that still
unwrap the words, make them harder
life giving
summing like that
Thanks John
Al ;)
Yes, exciting subject, just want to unwrap her,
might do that still
unwrap the words, make them harder
life giving
summing like that
Thanks John
Al ;)
