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Dusk

Days turn into nights
The moon comes to greet the stars
Crickets chirp their songs

Written by haikuaholic

Published 15th Nov 2015

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Re. Dusk

15th Nov 2015 7:22pm

The use of the verb "greet" adds elegance to the middle line of this Haiku.

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15th Nov 2015 8:42pm

aw thanks :)

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Re. Dusk

17th Nov 2015 4:06pm

Beautiful imagery.

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17th Nov 2015 4:12pm

thank you :)

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