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Break-Up
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Break-Up
White smoke fills the air
Black smoke fills my aching lungs
But you killed me first
Written by
haikuaholic
Published
15th Nov 2015
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Re. Break-Up
lepperochan
(Craic-Dealer)
15th Nov 2015 2:43am
welcome to DU
I've read a few, all very good. this one so far is by far the best one. the white smoke to black smoke to death in three lines, very impressive
great stuff
fair play
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Re: Re. Break-Up
haikuaholic
15th Nov 2015 8:36pm
Thank you!
I've read a couple of yours as well. I really enjoy your pieces
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Re. Break-Up
jasonedwarddias
(Jason Dias)
16th Nov 2015 1:47am
Hm. I like things I don't understand. I'll contemplate this one.
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Re: Re. Break-Up
haikuaholic
16th Nov 2015 2:34am
Take your time! I'd be more than happy to explain anything if needed :)
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