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Re. Nobody
13th Nov 2015 3:18pm
thought provoking question I suppose it would be in the way you view it..
excellent inking..
love Crimsin
excellent inking..
love Crimsin
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Re: Re. Nobody
16th Nov 2015 9:52pm
Crimsin
Loneliness is always a double edged sword. I used to think that existing in that desert named "Seclusion" was necessary for me to be an effective Poet. Now I see that it's only necessary when I choose to write as the Daddy Phantom. I've just become writing a series of Poems that put emphasis on Chris, the boring, average, every day guy, I find it much easier to write outside of that realm when I'm not "Phantom". We'll see what the finished product looks like.
Loneliness is always a double edged sword. I used to think that existing in that desert named "Seclusion" was necessary for me to be an effective Poet. Now I see that it's only necessary when I choose to write as the Daddy Phantom. I've just become writing a series of Poems that put emphasis on Chris, the boring, average, every day guy, I find it much easier to write outside of that realm when I'm not "Phantom". We'll see what the finished product looks like.
Re. Nobody
It was difficult to understand at first due to background noise...but i listened again...nice piece....i enjoyed the reverb to give emphasis the way the screen became dark at the word darkness and white at light...great thought in execution
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Re: Re. Nobody
16th Nov 2015 9:57pm
Yeah! This production was tough because even though we had a great Canon EOS mark iii, I forgot to bring the microphone (oops). I did the best I could to tweek the sound in Sound-Forge and Adobe Audition, but there was only so much I could do. Thanks for noticing the effort I DID put in to fix the sound. Your comment alone made it all worth while.
Hoptep!
Hoptep!
Re. Nobody
16th Nov 2015 6:10pm
Re: Re. Nobody
16th Nov 2015 9:59pm
FIRE!
Where ya been Poetess? I'm so glad that you commented. I've been gone so long, I have to catch up on my favorite Poets... I'm getting there. I can't wait to check out your new material Goddess. Thank you as always for commenting.
Where ya been Poetess? I'm so glad that you commented. I've been gone so long, I have to catch up on my favorite Poets... I'm getting there. I can't wait to check out your new material Goddess. Thank you as always for commenting.
Re. Nobody
18th Nov 2015 8:47pm
I liked the nature metaphors in the piece. It's sorta like personification in reverse. It's too bad about the sound, but when you listen again you expect it and you're able to follow a little better. Anyway, it's better than I could have done. Good write.
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Re: Re. Nobody
29th Dec 2016 10:11am
Sorry about the sound, but I live and learn. I do however, love it when people comment about the technicalities of the video because the producer doesn't always catch it unless someone catches it for them. Thank you for your appreciation of the poem, and the comment about the sound.