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Lily

Much like a lily
Out of the river’s water
I’m lost without you
haikuaholic
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Re. Lily
11th Nov 2015 8:52pm
A lily that starts
blooming on poets' pasture
welcome to DU
applepie77
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Re: Re. Lily
15th Nov 2015 2:27am
Very beautiful, I applaud you!
haikuaholic
Re. Lily
Anonymous
- Edited 11th Nov 2015 10:35pm
11th Nov 2015 10:34pm
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Anonymous
Re: Re. Lily
15th Nov 2015 2:26am
Thank you! Happy to be here!
haikuaholic
Re. Lily
(Miss Chi)
11th Nov 2015 10:44pm
A fantastic debut :-)! Welcome to DU!
Chiyo
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Re: Re. Lily
15th Nov 2015 2:25am
Thank you! <3
haikuaholic
Re. Lily
12th Nov 2015 4:30am
Love the illustration of the lilly being out of its natural habitat to describe your feelings....welcome !!
lyricalmiss
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Re: Re. Lily
15th Nov 2015 2:24am
Thank you so much! Very glad to be here!
haikuaholic
Re. Lily
15th Nov 2015 9:30pm
May DU be your river welcome Haikuaholic
whale
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Re: Re. Lily
16th Nov 2015 00:01am
Thank you :)
haikuaholic

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