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Gun
Lived in the big city my whole life
Never had a need for a gun
Contemplating a more rural setting
Quieter and gentler perhaps
Problem is
Will I need a gun to feel safe
Out there in the black night
With only crickets for protection
The more I think about it
The worse it sounds
Plus you have to drive everywhere
This was a bad idea
Never had a need for a gun
Contemplating a more rural setting
Quieter and gentler perhaps
Problem is
Will I need a gun to feel safe
Out there in the black night
With only crickets for protection
The more I think about it
The worse it sounds
Plus you have to drive everywhere
This was a bad idea
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Re. Gun
8th Nov 2015 9:33pm
city's a great place to live, been there, done that but i do enjoy the nether regions greatly...
no need for a gun...just a live and let live attitude with the wildlife...that includes those who walk on two legs and come from a different planet ;)
driving...i did a forrest gump on saturday, driving to my destination i decided to bypass and keep going till i got tired then I turned around and came home...ltm...freedom...
no need for a gun...just a live and let live attitude with the wildlife...that includes those who walk on two legs and come from a different planet ;)
driving...i did a forrest gump on saturday, driving to my destination i decided to bypass and keep going till i got tired then I turned around and came home...ltm...freedom...
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Re. Gun
9th Nov 2015 12:33pm
I hate city life - for me it never feels safe - I am always on edge, eyes in the back of my head. I now live on a quiet Scottish island - rural feels much safer - a real sense of community here - but as always with people some love it some hate it :-)
Good write enjoyed :-)
Good write enjoyed :-)
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Re: Re. Gun
11th Nov 2015 11:37am
Re. Gun
9th Nov 2015 5:10pm
no, you wouldn't need a gun...but you would likely go stir crazy...listening to crickets and birds is nice for a while...but then I think you'd miss city life ...I would :) (p.s. put up two poems today on my site)
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Re: Re. Gun
11th Nov 2015 11:38am
The grass is brown on both sides of the fence ....
Little of both is good I suppose
Little of both is good I suppose
Re. Gun
Anonymous
9th Nov 2015 5:28pm
If you have not seen the movie Funny Farm..you ought to.
Probably the funniest movie about life in the country.
https://youtu.be/06MqvW7AzZg
Probably the funniest movie about life in the country.
https://youtu.be/06MqvW7AzZg
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Re. Gun
10th Nov 2015 8:55am
soft on country life, just not *too country.. ltm
hope you try out the rural pace sometime.
usually, you will know if you need a firearm after meeting any nabors! [eeks!]
hugs n respect, Poets..
~d
hope you try out the rural pace sometime.
usually, you will know if you need a firearm after meeting any nabors! [eeks!]
hugs n respect, Poets..
~d
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Re: Re. Gun
11th Nov 2015 11:41am
Some people asleep with the door open I've heard. ....
Always have a 4 legger nearby with a big bark .....
Always have a 4 legger nearby with a big bark .....
Re. Gun
10th Nov 2015 10:17am
city life sucks balls. i live smack damn in the middle of buttfucknowhere & that has major benefits.
also, shotguns make the best dildos. ijs ltm.
dig it
xo
also, shotguns make the best dildos. ijs ltm.
dig it
xo
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Re: Re. Gun
11th Nov 2015 11:42am
And here I thought you were a hip city chick .....
Do they allow black leather where u live ?
Do they allow black leather where u live ?
Re. Gun
10th Nov 2015 10:18am
I'm with you bro. But I've a possible solution, move to a 'tweener' u know that lil cross between the two
worlds lol... any who... Guns, hate them for what damage they can cause people, yet necessary in instances involving bears, wolves etc lol
worlds lol... any who... Guns, hate them for what damage they can cause people, yet necessary in instances involving bears, wolves etc lol
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Re. Gun
11th Nov 2015 11:43am