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Love
Watching from a distance
they were holding hands
Their hands were worn
yet they looked strong
Eyes spoke of tiredness
yet their lips looked warm
They way he looked at her
took my breath away
Love in its purest
and oldest form...
they were holding hands
Their hands were worn
yet they looked strong
Eyes spoke of tiredness
yet their lips looked warm
They way he looked at her
took my breath away
Love in its purest
and oldest form...
Published 7th Nov 2015
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7th Nov 2015 4:12am
7th Nov 2015 4:55am
Anonymous
7th Nov 2015 4:59am
'Love in its purest
and oldest form...'
Miss Lady. . .I got to hand it to you and this stanza. . .damn *brilliant*!. . .It's lines like these I wish I could pen;). . .xo, Devlin.
and oldest form...'
Miss Lady. . .I got to hand it to you and this stanza. . .damn *brilliant*!. . .It's lines like these I wish I could pen;). . .xo, Devlin.
Anonymous
7th Nov 2015 6:33am
Absolutely wonderful!
7th Nov 2015 1:34pm
Lovely Lady, you have captured the essence of what we all yearn for.
To find a love that lasts always>
has it's battle scars and remains true. That is what I wanted when I said " I do". Deeply touching write.
Loved this piece.
Keith
To find a love that lasts always>
has it's battle scars and remains true. That is what I wanted when I said " I do". Deeply touching write.
Loved this piece.
Keith
7th Nov 2015 2:35pm
Beautiful vision of love standing
thrust the test of time... Kudos my sweetheart :)
thrust the test of time... Kudos my sweetheart :)
7th Nov 2015 6:02pm
Mysterious, this was a brilliant heartfelt write.. i totally enjoyed.. with love..
Dave
Dave
Watching this couple actually brought tears to my eyes....Such beauty in them...Made think of the things in life that you just cannot touch...you need to feel them..<3 Thank you all
8th Nov 2015 3:38pm
Anonymous
8th Nov 2015 6:35pm
It reminded me of an old Debeer commercial, the one with the older couple in the park and a younger couple walk past them.
There's nothing like growing old together.
Thank you Lady M for reminding us the true beauty of lasting love.
**note: 4S first line 'the'
There's nothing like growing old together.
Thank you Lady M for reminding us the true beauty of lasting love.
**note: 4S first line 'the'
9th Nov 2015 9:19pm
You describe the scene so well Mysteriouslady. Not too many notice these nuances and catch them in their lines. You've succeeded brilliantly!
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