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Genesis 3
admonished,
“dare not eat of the vine”
but carelessly, rebeliously
I did eat.....
…..and the veil was lifted from eyes
and I saw that which I chose to see
"doctor my eyes"
was I so unwise
to simply believe
that our love, our lust,
the covetousness of
another's treasure
would harmeth thee....?
…...finding in the end
that the greatest loss
was not losing her,
but losing the heart and soul of me........
( "....trust not thine heart nor lean upon thy own understanding" )
written for a competition on the DU
Published 6th Nov 2015
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6th Nov 2015 1:42pm
A beautiful piece M. Love the title and the forbidden fruit metaphor running through. Great collage per usual...
Very nice job..
Very nice job..
7th Nov 2015 4:59am
18th Mar 2016 11:09pm
26th Sep 2016 6:23pm
Wow... love everything that refers to the garden of Eden... the fordbidden fruit...
…...finding in the end
that the greatest loss
was not losing her,
but losing the heart and soul of me > exactly that!
Phew... this one hits home!
…...finding in the end
that the greatest loss
was not losing her,
but losing the heart and soul of me > exactly that!
Phew... this one hits home!
