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This Ones For You
To all the feeling fakers,
the miserable heart breakers
middle of the night ass shakers
You know who you are
Well eat a dick bitches
Yall are shamed
for the egos and souls youve maimed
You never cared or dared to share
any of your inner selves
Locked their tears away
with nothing truthful to say about
all the harm you've done
No wonder all the men are on the run
to hide from your so called affections
Yall gave them nothing but rejections
Just tell it like it is and you'll get respect
Fuck you bitches now its your time to reflect
on all the pain you've cause my fellow men
Maybe yall think twice before you do it again
Karma is in town, and shes getting restless
Your names wont be on any guest lists
You get what yall deserve for being flat out heartless
We know what youve been looking for,
Aint the time to settle an old score
go fuck yourselves, you miserable whores
Note: Not to anyone here....just a rant about some real life bitches that are so heartless, even the Devil himself refused them access to his domain.
the miserable heart breakers
middle of the night ass shakers
You know who you are
Well eat a dick bitches
Yall are shamed
for the egos and souls youve maimed
You never cared or dared to share
any of your inner selves
Locked their tears away
with nothing truthful to say about
all the harm you've done
No wonder all the men are on the run
to hide from your so called affections
Yall gave them nothing but rejections
Just tell it like it is and you'll get respect
Fuck you bitches now its your time to reflect
on all the pain you've cause my fellow men
Maybe yall think twice before you do it again
Karma is in town, and shes getting restless
Your names wont be on any guest lists
You get what yall deserve for being flat out heartless
We know what youve been looking for,
Aint the time to settle an old score
go fuck yourselves, you miserable whores
Note: Not to anyone here....just a rant about some real life bitches that are so heartless, even the Devil himself refused them access to his domain.
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Re. This Ones For You
2nd Nov 2015 10:50am
Whoa!! Yea I do believe I've met a few of those myself! n truth to tell
I'm STILL broken by their effects...
Scolding hot venom my dear!
I'm STILL broken by their effects...
Scolding hot venom my dear!
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Re: Re. This Ones For You
2nd Nov 2015 11:29pm
Shit happens, right? <3 Always love to see you in my updates, Poetikmind! <3
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2nd Nov 2015 6:22pm
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2nd Nov 2015 11:30pm
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Anonymous
2nd Nov 2015 6:25pm
Brilliant, Mysterious.. love the passion and anger in this piece.. telling the truth, will set you free.. with love..
Dave
Dave
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Re: Re. This Ones For You
2nd Nov 2015 11:31pm
Thanks for your comments and continued support, Dave. As always seeing you in my feed makes me smile. <3
Re. This Ones For You
2nd Nov 2015 8:09pm
I'll bet you felt better after this rant, Mysteriouslady. This is great catharsis, probably as much of a thrill to read as it was a relief to write. Fine work!
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Re: Re. This Ones For You
2nd Nov 2015 11:32pm
Thanks Crow. Seeing as I could not tell said person(s) how I was feeling, I decided to rant a bit. Felt great. <3
Re. This Ones For You
3rd Nov 2015 1:52am
Well my sweet Lady, it is very good to read you again Enjoyed the energy and passion of the write; have met and still know some
of these less than wonderful women. Enjoyed reading probably as much as you enjoyed the release
of the rant.
Keith
of these less than wonderful women. Enjoyed reading probably as much as you enjoyed the release
of the rant.
Keith
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Re: Re. This Ones For You
4th Nov 2015 2:31am
Thank you Keith. It gave me intense joy to read this to myself when I was done. HAHA...not all women are like this but to those that are...Karma will give you what you dish out. <3
Re. This Ones For You
3rd Nov 2015 3:54am
Extend your venomous tongue... Show them the truth from behind the lines. Takes guts along with that steam. Steamy good write!
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4th Nov 2015 2:34am
Why thank you LokiOfLierati. All it takes is the right mood and some inspiration. There was, dare I say an incident that caused this poem to be born. <3
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3rd Nov 2015 6:23am
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4th Nov 2015 2:35am
Sometimes the heartless need to be called upon. And told where to go.. Thank you JJ. Sincerely. <3
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3rd Nov 2015 12:57pm
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An excellent delivery of (poetic) justice. Awesome way to release. If a poet doesn't call it for what it is then Heaven help us. Everyone agrees that this world got people of all sorts but there are some who stand out.. and (deservedly) get whiplashed just like here. Good on ya.
KDAmB
KDAmB
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Re: Re. This Ones For You
4th Nov 2015 3:21am
Thank you, KDAmB. Sometimes we must unleash our feelings or we will go crazy. <3