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fucked in Niagara mist
fucked in Niagara mist
Fucked in Niagara
This hardly is a dick
in her deepest gorge
where Niagara falls
and
when you go into the mist
with blind eyes
fuckxxx you should have brought a torch
as match sticks cannot
light the dark tunnel
where will you find
your small penis
absorbed
in the waves
of oscillations
how will yours ever engorge
tis cold inside
burn up yours
then see what sex is
when dynamite bursts inside it
as both of you orgasm
but do you hope to fathom
the final engorgement
ere yours blasts....
if at all!
Fucked in Niagara
This hardly is a dick
in her deepest gorge
where Niagara falls
and
when you go into the mist
with blind eyes
fuckxxx you should have brought a torch
as match sticks cannot
light the dark tunnel
where will you find
your small penis
absorbed
in the waves
of oscillations
how will yours ever engorge
tis cold inside
burn up yours
then see what sex is
when dynamite bursts inside it
as both of you orgasm
but do you hope to fathom
the final engorgement
ere yours blasts....
if at all!
Published 31st Oct 2015
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31st Oct 2015 3:40am
I liked all of this...wish the title..falls wet pussy gooooosh and or rush of seminal fluid had been carried all the way through..
It goes from wet to dynamite.
Loved both parts..just felt like 2 parts..
Engorged is used a lot. Yes this is cheeky..and i have soaked genitals in mih mind both big and small...
You often confuse me darlin goin in and out of tenses and im unsure whos fuckin who.
These are just my personal linear thought preferences..i am just partial to story telling...beginning middle end of sex or thought vs the more abstract...
I did enjoy this though....and it looks sharp.
Thanks for showing me...
Love
Calamity of Jennifer
It goes from wet to dynamite.
Loved both parts..just felt like 2 parts..
Engorged is used a lot. Yes this is cheeky..and i have soaked genitals in mih mind both big and small...
You often confuse me darlin goin in and out of tenses and im unsure whos fuckin who.
These are just my personal linear thought preferences..i am just partial to story telling...beginning middle end of sex or thought vs the more abstract...
I did enjoy this though....and it looks sharp.
Thanks for showing me...
Love
Calamity of Jennifer
31st Oct 2015 7:09pm
31st Oct 2015 3:42am
31st Oct 2015 7:10pm
