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Obsession
Fingers on sleek velum skin
Seeking softness in secret folds
She draws him deep within
Whilst whispering fragrant lies
Lullabies of lust
Betrayed trust
He inhales the musk
Tastes the other woman
On her lying lips
She’s been there again
Sharing her love with her again
She knows he knows, doesn't care
Her demon dark eyes assess him
Her devil hands caress him
Wrapping languid legs
Round loyal loins
Hears his groans he’s lost
No matter the cost he’s hers
His confession of obsession
Means he’ll never leave
She owns both her and him
Cock and quim
Servile slaves
Hers to the grave
Recumbent, she's sated
Laying elated in juices of joy
'She’s dead' he quietly said
'Now it’s me and you
And we’re beyond all hope'
She laughs ‘til he produces the rope
Published 28th Oct 2015
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28th Oct 2015 11:34pm
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29th Oct 2015 00:01am
29th Oct 2015 1:16am
29th Oct 2015 11:25am
Thank you IvarHakuse for your thoughtful comment you are quite right though it was meant to be erotic rather than pornographic.
Be lucky
Be lucky
30th Oct 2015 3:11am
an excellent piece of erotica, beautifully written - not dirty or pornographic the words used fit the mood of the poem perfectly. interesting, nay fascinating, rhyming scheme
I like this a lot :-)
I like this a lot :-)
30th Oct 2015 11:59am
Thank you very much David for recognising my intent to write erotica with being crude.
Best regards
Best regards
1st Nov 2015 7:00pm
I love this hot ink from you funnyman! You know, it’s very rare we get to taste your erotic and it taste good. I think I will savor the flavor. ;) Btw… the dark turn of events made this a sexy little thriller, in a sense. Enjoyed babe…
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1st Nov 2015 11:08pm
Thank you Lady Rain for your kindness I'm glad you enjoyed it. I might post some more funny stuff soon. Watch this space. ;-)
4th Nov 2015 5:38am
4th Nov 2015 6:40pm
As, sadly, it has so many times throughout history John. Thanks for dropping by mate.
