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Discipline
I crave for your temple
with each pulsating need
resisting blooming pain
bleeding for your greed
draped in twined night
bridled in velvet silk
My limbs laced in balm
shadows dance aflame
singe with illicit vows
labyrinth of webs
sweet ache I weep
release at your feet
Gravity at center
yearning your cruelty
quieting my moans
in darkened fantasies
love me tenderly
love me cold heartedly
In the windfall of knots
binding you and me.
Published 25th Oct 2015
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25th Oct 2015 9:31pm
25th Oct 2015 10:04pm
I have to bow to you with such a wonderful compliment by a gorgeous woman.
Thank you Crim ; )
Thank you Crim ; )
Anonymous
25th Oct 2015 9:32pm
Lena, this a beautifully luscious erotic piece.. really enjoyed.. nice to read a new ink from you my sista.. love, and respect..
Dave
Dave
25th Oct 2015 10:07pm
Thank you so much little brother.
I've been so busy, but it's all with some great and positive things. You'd be happy and proud ;-)
I've been keeping and eye on you and you are on fire. Love it!
I've been so busy, but it's all with some great and positive things. You'd be happy and proud ;-)
I've been keeping and eye on you and you are on fire. Love it!
26th Oct 2015 00:36am
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26th Oct 2015 11:37am
26th Oct 2015 2:20am
The title is awesome for it demands restraint which can be hard to find in the midst of action infrered in the poem. Also enjoyed the metaphor of "binds", which can refer to multiple meanings.
26th Oct 2015 11:50am
I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment Jazz ; )
There are definitely several meanings.
There are definitely several meanings.
26th Oct 2015 2:40am
26th Oct 2015 11:51am
Anonymous
26th Oct 2015 2:42am
Lady Lena. . .what a stunning & breathtaking piece of work you've webbed here. . .who would have thought eroticism could be so provocative w/ out all the explicit details. . .Enjoyed. . .xo, Devlin.
26th Oct 2015 12:08pm
Oh thank you mamacita!
I'm honored by your compliment and so happy you enjoyed it ; )
I'm honored by your compliment and so happy you enjoyed it ; )
26th Oct 2015 2:52am
This was so damn seductive Lena! I enjoyed the soft bondage.
"My limbs laced in balm
shadows dance aflame
singe with illicit vows
labyrinth of webs
sweet ache I weep
release at your feet" <--- Love this stanza!
"My limbs laced in balm
shadows dance aflame
singe with illicit vows
labyrinth of webs
sweet ache I weep
release at your feet" <--- Love this stanza!
26th Oct 2015 12:12pm
Thank you mamacita!
That stanza is actually my favorite too. It has a special meaning.
That stanza is actually my favorite too. It has a special meaning.
26th Oct 2015 8:29am
Holy Shitzsticks!! Wow that pic along is smoking hott, but your exceptional ink took it into the strata sphere of heated pleasures!! lol... Brava Mamcita! :)
26th Oct 2015 12:56pm
26th Oct 2015 11:55am
26th Oct 2015 12:57pm
Anonymous
27th Oct 2015 5:35am
Damn Lena, not only you got the moves but you know how to bring the sensuality alive dripping with lust.
There is something highly erotic releasing all power..i love the last 4 lines, beautiful and deep.
There is something highly erotic releasing all power..i love the last 4 lines, beautiful and deep.
1st Nov 2015 11:09pm
What an honor coming from you Vee.
Thank you!
When you are able to release all power without fear, it's truly erotic ; )
Thank you!
When you are able to release all power without fear, it's truly erotic ; )
27th Oct 2015 7:22pm
"love me tenderly /love me cold heartedly" super sexy! was bound by this beautiful ballad...
1st Nov 2015 11:12pm
1st Nov 2015 2:26am
wow what a hot way to get discipline *whew* Janet Jackson song "Discipline" popped in my head when i read this piece... very seductive lava ink Lena :D
1st Nov 2015 11:23pm
Lol..... I will admit, I wasn't sure how that song went and I YouTube d it. I found a video of her performing that song in a hot suit for a guy they pulled from the audience. It was fun and sexy!
Thank you for the compliment Magic ; )
Thank you for the compliment Magic ; )
5th Nov 2015 6:20pm
Lena, the first line captivated me. Such reverence in your craving. I'm pretty clueless regarding BDSM but I understand the wonderful eroticism in this piece. Brava!
6th Nov 2015 1:33pm
You taking the time to read and comment is starting off my weekend right ; )
Thank you so much!
Thank you so much!
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23rd Nov 2015 3:16am
Submissive Origami? What a unique way of looking at it. That's brilliant. Excellent comment.
Thank you ; )
Thank you ; )
Anonymous
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24th Nov 2015 11:22pm
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26th Nov 2015 10:44pm
This is an incredible honor to have the Queen of Erotica visit my page.......curtsey to you my dear.
Thank you so much for such a humbling comment ; )
Thank you so much for such a humbling comment ; )
18th Dec 2015 9:02pm
I love your choice of words so much! Lol I dub thee erotic queen teach me the way! Lol
22nd Dec 2015 4:27pm
Awww you are so kind . There's so much talent here girl. Thank you so much ; )
26th May 2017 6:06pm
my word, this is my new poetry goddess to follow,, excellent, you speak what I want to say. Wonderful, thanks, Marilyn
26th May 2017 6:14pm
19th Jun 2017 4:08pm
yearning your cruelty
quieting my moans
in darkened fantasies
love me tenderly
love me cold heartedly
Twisted love, I like it...
quieting my moans
in darkened fantasies
love me tenderly
love me cold heartedly
Twisted love, I like it...
19th Jun 2017 7:40pm
Anonymous
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