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Water Goddess
you wield much magic
lovely water Goddess
with your essence
letting so many
sip from your healing potion
drink from me now
I've saved a wellspring
for just this occasion
a restoring spell
taste of me
let your thirst be quenched
I love you beautiful
you have a fierce and loving spirit
though some don't see
turning a blind eye to what's before them
spell casting now
that their eyes be salved
opening to the vision I see
because in truth
you need the command
of your Dominant Poseidon
coming with his deepest devotion
not on bended knee
standing strong and true
taking your pain on his shoulders
casting it away with his adoring embrace
loving all of you not just the vision you are
if not him another will
swoop you in his mighty arms
taking the lovely creature you are
to distant lands
where you will be worshipped
like the Goddess you are
Published 23rd Oct 2015
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23rd Oct 2015 00:26am
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23rd Oct 2015 00:34am
thank you beautiful one I hope to make you smile :)
I love you..
xoxoxo Brenda
I love you..
xoxoxo Brenda
23rd Oct 2015 00:26am
Ahh sweet loving passionate Bren..love your many manifistations.
This could be a poem unto you! Certainly you apear in mih mind like this...an honorable and delightful validation to any woman. There are some truely unique and outstanding ones down here.
Awesome write!
Love
Jennifer
This could be a poem unto you! Certainly you apear in mih mind like this...an honorable and delightful validation to any woman. There are some truely unique and outstanding ones down here.
Awesome write!
Love
Jennifer
23rd Oct 2015 00:36am
thank you beautiful Jennifer for showing love to me and this write :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
Anonymous
23rd Oct 2015 00:34am
Forever and always is the gist of this fantastic poem . . .
"you need the command
of your Dominant Poseidon"
What a fantastic couplet . . .
The wondrous of these
two lines are central to
this poem also.
Loved the way you fused together wonderful stanza's to make this work as wonderful as it is!
"you need the command
of your Dominant Poseidon"
What a fantastic couplet . . .
The wondrous of these
two lines are central to
this poem also.
Loved the way you fused together wonderful stanza's to make this work as wonderful as it is!
23rd Oct 2015 00:39am
23rd Oct 2015 00:52am
It's the Dominant's honor to embrace his Water Goddess. This is gorgeous, Crim. You have a tenderly imaginative way with fantasy, allowing Dominants and Submissives to become deities. Great work!
23rd Oct 2015 1:10am
23rd Oct 2015 1:25am
"if not him another..."
well of course there's
plenty more flesh
in the sea..:)
oh, but seriously,
your imagination
always impresses, Crim...
well of course there's
plenty more flesh
in the sea..:)
oh, but seriously,
your imagination
always impresses, Crim...
24th Oct 2015 4:48pm
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23rd Oct 2015 10:46am
Aaaawwww...What a sweet dedication... See? There u go again, showing that SOFTEE in you! lol
24th Oct 2015 4:53pm
Anonymous
23rd Oct 2015 2:31pm
Such a vivid wonderful surprise of an ink. Breathtaking my dear.
24th Oct 2015 4:54pm
23rd Oct 2015 5:03pm
Your restoral spell is perfect Brenda.. you burn a hot altar yknw? yessss..;)
*candles lit fer healing ..adding my strength to this loving intent..
"taste of me
let your thirst be quenched
I love you beautiful"
&
"you have a fierce and loving spirit
though some don't see
turning a blind eye to what's before them" **
~you are striking gorgeous in heartways & truthful encouragement..
the other half was a'glow, surely..this gets my agreeing awwess too.
"spell casting now
that their eyes be salved
opening to the vision I see"
~faves the eye opener.. Bless-ed Be, *this..
You are a pleasure ladyluv, to read after my days of recoup..
your love graces those around you in shiny ways & I felt most
tender vibes from the healing wishes. perfectly put!
always loves
~d
*candles lit fer healing ..adding my strength to this loving intent..
"taste of me
let your thirst be quenched
I love you beautiful"
&
"you have a fierce and loving spirit
though some don't see
turning a blind eye to what's before them" **
~you are striking gorgeous in heartways & truthful encouragement..
the other half was a'glow, surely..this gets my agreeing awwess too.
"spell casting now
that their eyes be salved
opening to the vision I see"
~faves the eye opener.. Bless-ed Be, *this..
You are a pleasure ladyluv, to read after my days of recoup..
your love graces those around you in shiny ways & I felt most
tender vibes from the healing wishes. perfectly put!
always loves
~d
24th Oct 2015 4:57pm
lovely d~ sending love you way on your recoup and big hugs..
thank you beautiful for showing so much love on this writes..
love that you added power to this spell casting with your own..
I cherish your thoughts and visits :)
love you beautiful..
xoxoxo Brenda
thank you beautiful for showing so much love on this writes..
love that you added power to this spell casting with your own..
I cherish your thoughts and visits :)
love you beautiful..
xoxoxo Brenda
23rd Oct 2015 10:53pm
24th Oct 2015 4:59pm
24th Oct 2015 00:25am
Brenda, this is beautifully written.. i'm so blown away.. into the list it goes.. with love..
Dave
Dave
24th Oct 2015 5:00pm
24th Oct 2015 2:14am
24th Oct 2015 5:01pm
24th Oct 2015 3:49am
Brenda just another beautiful write.
I really enjoy the softer side of you.
I also enjoyed how you wove in the idea of dominate and submissive into this write.
Much love
As always
Keith
I really enjoy the softer side of you.
I also enjoyed how you wove in the idea of dominate and submissive into this write.
Much love
As always
Keith
24th Oct 2015 5:02pm
24th Oct 2015 5:43am
Gorgeous! Just Gorgeous! You love people so hard, Crim.........and that's a beautiful thang'.
I can see it, feel it and right now....I'm inhaling it......xo
I can see it, feel it and right now....I'm inhaling it......xo
24th Oct 2015 5:03pm
thank you most graciously lovely Rain was written for a special lady :)
love Crim
love Crim
24th Oct 2015 6:00am
24th Oct 2015 5:04pm
24th Oct 2015 6:26am
Crim! I love this! Wow you are so gifted with your words!!!
kill me now!
spell casting now
that their eyes be salved
opening to the vision I see
because in truth
you need the command
of your Dominant Poseidon
coming with his deepest devotion
not on bended knee
standing strong and true
These words are so powerful , you are on fire Dear heart!!!
in the list FFS!!!!
loves you Sis
((((((Crim))))))))
Zazzles xoxoxox
kill me now!
spell casting now
that their eyes be salved
opening to the vision I see
because in truth
you need the command
of your Dominant Poseidon
coming with his deepest devotion
not on bended knee
standing strong and true
These words are so powerful , you are on fire Dear heart!!!
in the list FFS!!!!
loves you Sis
((((((Crim))))))))
Zazzles xoxoxox
24th Oct 2015 5:06pm
thank you beautiful Jackie for showing so much love to this ink :)
love you lady..
xoxoxo Brenda
love you lady..
xoxoxo Brenda
24th Oct 2015 5:18pm
a poem of shimmering support, "I've saved a wellspring/ for just this occasion/ a restoring spell "... sweet Crim...
25th Oct 2015 2:57am
24th Oct 2015 5:31pm
A magnificently pristine quenching; a cosmically divine envisioning! The mystic muse finds the energies in which it elicits. In love with this ink, Sweet Sin. Tried to bookmark, sigh. I'm at my limit. (growls) love, blue angel
25th Oct 2015 2:58am
thank you lovely Angel for such beautiful comments and the love you show me :)
love Crim
love Crim
25th Oct 2015 00:23am
25th Oct 2015 3:02am
